Fruit's Basket; Ayame/Hatori

[random_glitch]

Title: Untitled, sadly. Bad me.
Author: random_glitch
Theme: Passion
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Wherein Ayame receives the results of his attempts at getting under Hatori's skin.
Previous Parts: Attraction and Romance
Ramble: I'm a little iffy with how this one turned out, so please, tell me what you think. :D

Comments

[superkappa]

I am so loving this. It seems very believable for the two of them.

[random_glitch]

Does it? Thank you so much! I'm very worried that I'm not doing the two of them justice...

[superkappa]

I think you're doing it very well. And I'm quite in love with your Ayame, if I do say so myself

[chibi_plum]

I love this pairing...so sad that there aren't many people who think they are believable. I've always thought Hatori would be the one to fight off his emotions, but (randomly) a friend of mine told me that she believes Hatori is a total closet bishie, and reversed her 'version' of them getting together entirely. heh. They are really cute, and you portrayed the abrupt beginning of an intense encounter very well. Thanks for sharing! *applauds you* ^_^

[shinineko1]

>> next part please? Thank you very much. *bangs head against the desk*

[finwealtariel]

Oh gosh.. that was just so... beautiful *sniffs*

[akito1994]

is it going to be an epic?
cos i am waiting for it...