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AU Series: Equilibrium - Chapter Eight

Aug 22, 2008 10:41

The next morning, Aiba woke before Nino. As he lay in bed staring at the ceiling, he wondered if he had managed to fall asleep at all; his sleep had been broken and restless. He stayed there until it was light enough that the maids would be rising too. He bathed and dressed before Nino even began to stir and set about his chores. ( Read more... )

t: equilibrium, p: nino/ohno, #series, r: r, p: aiba/sho, x: au, x: smut

Comments 28

arashi_nana August 22 2008, 02:14:26 UTC

"And there was nothing else for Sho to do but kiss him quiet. It was a chaste kiss, coloured with the barest hesitation; a kiss for the sake of a kiss. There was no taking, only giving. Sho gave him, with that very first kiss, the beginning."

that was my favourite line/lines out of the whole thing.
you write really well. keep it up!

maiaide August 22 2008, 04:12:58 UTC

I like that one too. :D I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you!

waxrose August 22 2008, 02:19:40 UTC

AJDKFLF;FJDK. *_________*

This chapter was definitely well worth the wait.

And oh, poor Jun. :(((( But the angst, eee, it hurts so good. :D

maiaide August 22 2008, 04:13:57 UTC

Did I break you? I hope so cuz it was killing me near the end. I thought I was going to choke on a cliche or something.

I wish my grass was emo so it would cut itself. Ahhhh I know how to torture them good.

chiiae August 22 2008, 02:28:01 UTC

HOT!!
The moment I've been waiting for since I snatched your outlines for reading xD

<3
I think that was well worth the long wait~ =D You did awesome as always. Your way with words always makes me a happy camper~

maiaide August 22 2008, 04:14:49 UTC

Ahah you were waiting for THIS moment? Not any other ones to come? Oh yes. This is only the beginning... no, lies, this is half way. Unless I fast track somethings down the road, who knows.

chiiae August 22 2008, 04:32:11 UTC

Not JUST this moment, of course~ lol 8D I'm really really looking forward to what's still coming! I was just dying for the first real bit of sakuraiba <3<3<3 No fast tracking!!

tinahyena August 22 2008, 02:32:55 UTC

this was wonderfully written and well worth the wait. my heart cracked a little for jun's pain. then it melted from all the love some time around nino's wish for "masaki and sho to find happiness in each other".

maiaide August 22 2008, 04:15:18 UTC

Thank you!

kos_mos26 August 22 2008, 02:35:56 UTC

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....I have no idea what to say after that...no matter what I say it, will pale in comparison to the beautiful, outstanding words I just read.

I was surprised that Jun could force himself to give up Aiba, (I was expecting a confrontation with Sho too) but that scene so was incredible I'm glad I didn't expect it.

I smiled here though Sho looked faintly guilty as if he had been the one who forced Jun to drink himself into oblivion because of the irony. (A sad smile though, given Jun's poor state ( ... )

maiaide August 22 2008, 04:18:02 UTC

You were, eh? I'm glad I managed to leave some things as a surprise (though quite unintentional). I started writing a kind of pseudo-confrontational thing with Sho but it wasn't having it so I scraped it.

I torture that boy too much. I need to write something else where he gets some ass to make up for it.

You thought his wish was selfish? XD That's awesome! Haha, I never thought of it that way, but it works, it really does.

The sex was a bitch to write. Well, a bitch to start. It took me over a day to write the last section. T_T

Lucky for you, this is only the halfway point.