AU Series: Equilibrium - Chapter Five Preview

[maiaide]

            Sho sat on the front veranda of the guest house, staring out into the darkening night.  It had been four days since he and Ohno had been called to the keep for the latest report of the churning tide of unrest in the province.  It had been four days since he had been granted a view of Ohno that he had never seen before.  He had learned

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[honeycorrupts]

And yet, Sho could not ignore the incessant feeling winding around him and brushing up against his legs like one of the stray cats from the village that they didn’t need him.
Love the way you wrote this. LOVE

Cannot wait for the 5th chapter. You're getting more confident in your writing, and your style is getting better. You're going to make us tear up because of Sho's future aren't you?~

As for the evil!arashi icon, you only need a JonJUN who is in dos mode.

.... i guess Jon = Jun to me. I remember a long time ago, every time I wanted to write Jun I would write Jin and get people confused. Oh what fun. I wonder what would happen if Jun was called Jin in real life.

[maiaide]

For a minute there I was like, WTF is she talking about? Jon? but now I get it. I totally want to make a teary moment. But hopefully happy?

[honeycorrupts]

A tear jerker is always a good thing! I support you! just as long as my sakuraiba gets a happy ending, you can make them suffer all you want in between

[chiiae]

Can`t wait!! =D~