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everystarrfall June 17 2008, 10:23:35 UTC
LDLAFJSDFDF;D o hai thar, I wanna be first to flail. :3

Like I said, I absolutely love your wording and yosh, therefore shall shortly be starting your very own following. :P

At the beginning of this I was like OMG SAD (because even in fic, hearing reading Sho talk about his father really was sad, and then you went and killed off Bakanishi). And then at the end I was all OMG YAY (your Ohmiya is seriously so fucking sweet, I've got diabetes now. That whole choose love over duty thing, I'm such a sappy LOVE CONQUERS ALL type of person...). And then some OMG NUUUU -clings- when I read your a/n about the whole this Ohmiyacentricness will be rectified soon business. Which is great because I hope that means more Sakuraiba (always a good thing, obv), but me and my sweet tooth will miss the Ohmiya goodness (I'm sure Aiba and his cute clumsyness will make my heart melt all the same, though &hearts).

Love love love this. Flailing complete. Now going back to reread the Ohmiya porn the previous chapters of this fic.

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everystarrfall June 17 2008, 13:31:50 UTC
...I tried to put a ♥ up there, and it didn't go through. And I am just realizing this now. -is irked- [/I cannot type]

Mmkay, so on second readthrough, I love the edit. It definitely adds something to the story. I especially like how you put in some more detail about Jin.

With Ohno talking at the end, it's just so damned poetic Love it to bits. So then I was like, why isn't that my favorite paragraph? (Although it's not just one paragraph, but rather an entire chunk of the chapter, but nevermind that.) I think you're right, it's definitely the touch of emo in the part where Ohno's all 'what if' about not being able to touch Nino (...etc, but 1) I'm not going to type out that entire sentence again with the talk to's and such, or whatever it is and 2) this is deemed the most important as I am a pervert rabid Ohmiya fangirl), that's what does it for me. <3 ( ... )

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sanctified_x June 17 2008, 10:30:50 UTC
DEAD somebody beat meeeeeeeeeee.

As I told you the first time around it fucking rocks and I still love the fact that you gave JIN of all people a fucking cameo. <33333333333 move on to the Sakuraiba love, now. You know my heat's waiting for it.

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maiaide June 17 2008, 13:09:17 UTC
IM PREPPING OKAY? Gotta get everyone nice and prepared. Lots of lube and stretching, you know. Don't want you hurting (too much) in the morning.

JIN CAMEOO. After reading all your KT fic recs, I really like Jin and want to write him so I'm a bit sad he had to be sacrificed for plot.

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chiiae June 17 2008, 10:38:21 UTC
<3

Cause I'm too lazy to find a real heart.
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT. BIG TIME =D
YOU MAKE CHELSEA HAPPY...and hungry.

♥♥♥
^I found them!

...though you still need to move on with the sakuraiba loving! =P

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maiaide June 17 2008, 13:10:57 UTC
It's in the works, mmkay? I'm laying the groundwork here and it will show for it later. Although maybe only to my highly trained literary mind will all the little intricacies and symbolism I've been laying out will make sense. D:

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honeyswallow June 17 2008, 10:55:54 UTC
This is as exciting as ever! And i#d never complain about Ohmiya ^o^

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starsystems June 17 2008, 12:00:47 UTC
Yayy, a new chapter! :D I was actually wishing just yesterday that you'd update soon.

I love this fic so much. All the detail and the interesting plot and the cuteness that is Ohmiya. Can't wait for the Sho/Aiba!

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maiaide June 17 2008, 13:12:31 UTC
\:D/ Huzzah! I must be psychic or something.

I have made such a perfect Ohmiya in this universe.. I'm almost afraid to get to Sho and Aiba cuz I don't know if they'll be as good! D:

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