Ohmiya: Reverse

[maiaide]

Title: Reverse
Pairing: Nino/Ohno
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,123
Summary: Nino makes a mistake and it costs him everything.
Notes: Inspired by Utada's "Come Back to Me" and it's probably really obvious.  I don't care.  I played with a new style/format and I hope that is interesting at least.  Just something short for fun though it's really angsty.  The

Comments

[waxrose]

:((((((( I NEED RAINBOWS STAT.

[maiaide]

I KNOW I'M SORRY. I WILL WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY.

[hontowa]

Wow, I'm amazed that such an interesting and well written fic could come out of such a terrible song XD (my opinon only, of course)

You know it's a good angst fic when you get that clenchy stomach feeling reading it. I hope to see more stuff from you in the future, maybe something happy next time? XD

[maiaide]

Well, at least it's not "Easy breezy Japanesey".

OOooh clenchy feeling! I don't think anyone's told me that before. You're not the only person to say I should write happy fic. It's on my list. Maybe a "get together" fic instead of a "break up" fic.

[hontowa]

Very true XD Anything is better than that.

I'm sure everyone would be glad to see a happy fic, but we'd be just as happy to see whatever comes to your mind first :D

[ruisetsuna]

Ohh, Ohno :((( ♥ ♥ ♥

[gimmick_game]

Oh god. There goes my heart, ripped right out of my chest. ;o;

Absolutely beautiful.

[jliann]

I saw Utada's Come Back to Me and I didn't even need another reason to read this. And knowing the lyrics, I should've seen that ending coming a mile off, but somehow I was still hoping till the very end that "Omg Nino, tell me you *didn't*" T___T

*sob* S-sequel?