Ohmiya: Reverse

[maiaide]

Title: Reverse
Pairing: Nino/Ohno
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,123
Summary: Nino makes a mistake and it costs him everything.
Notes: Inspired by Utada's "Come Back to Me" and it's probably really obvious.  I don't care.  I played with a new style/format and I hope that is interesting at least.  Just something short for fun though it's really angsty.  The

Comments

[honeypuffed]

you know, i think sometimes it would pay to read the title, lmao. i was reading this and was all, 'OH, OH IT'S BACKWARDS!' and then saw the title after finishing and was all '...oh.' ahahah, i guess, at least i could understand? :D :D

....and whut. why you angst ;;;;;;;

[maiaide]

lol Well, the title doesn't really tell you much either. UTADA STARTED IT. SHE ANGSTED FIRST.

[oviparous]

GYAAAAAAAA YOU ARE HORRIBLE.

write happy fic please.

i liked the mail return message, and how nino played with the tab of the can. :DDD

[maiaide]

I will write happy fic! Now that this is out of my system. Except it was really strange cuz I keep singing ANA Okinawa jingle while writing it. O_o YAGI! I swear. Happy travel or teacher fic coming later. How was the backwards thing?

[oviparous]

i liked it mainly because it justified the ending. i see why you thought it weird, but honestly, it's backward and it shouldn't be any other way, should it?

yes please write either happy travel fic or teacher fic. XD i am loving idea of travel fic because i've never read one and we've gotta admit it's pretty canon because the four went to hakone, minus sho, didn't they? utaban episode with the broken plate. ahahahaha. it's always given me a nice fuzzy feeling like, "awww they go out together!" and jun drove aiba's car into the tollbooth or something hahahahahahaha i am getting so excited please write it!!!

oh yeah sapporo fic has jun as a teacher too. my fic defies normality (see i used my words already) because jun and nino are in female-dominated careers. why do i like to do things like that?!

[maiaide]

HAHa I know! That's what Arashi has on all the other groups. PROOF. But maybe I just don't give a crap about the rest of them to know those things. Actually, I bet K8 does but I'm not into them. LOL

EXCITED. Maybe I'll plot some stuff out this weekend. I'm going to sing karaoke with my new teacher friend named Sho tomorrow. :D

I feel all happy. :D I gave kimchi omiyage to my conbini owner. She's so nice.

[bakushou]

I love the reverse format! It clicked so when I read the ending, I wasn't confused. LMAO but awww angsty. But I'm partly conflicted because in all honesty, the last sentence kinda makes me snicker.

Otherwise though, I really like the argument in the mid-end there. I also like Jun's obvious defensiveness for Ohno there. Also, if after reading it all, you kind of rewind to the top of the story, the green room seems a lot more cold. Like, "Wow they are really cold shouldering him!" I like that too.

Amazing one-shot! Look at you, rocking my world. <3

[rukia1314]

so angsty >3<
i wonder who the other guy is... =S who broke ohmiya.

[maiaide]

Who says it's a guy? Haha. Thanks for reading! :)

[rukia1314]

LOL.! whoever the other person is XD

ur welcome~ ^^

[holophonograph]

SDAFLFSDVSDG! :( I shouldn't read sad stuff just before going to bed lol but I couldn't help it, I love all shades of Ohmiya, the fluff and the angst XD This was so good, the desperation and the sadness really got to me.

[maiaide]

Yes, sad things before bed isn't so good. But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway. :)