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stablergirl

Number Sixty Six (3/?)

May 31, 2009 15:14

They all know Robin doesn’t speak to him.

They all know there’s something strange about his showing up.

They all know there’s serious panic in Robin’s eyes, and they all notice the contrast of Charlie’s unrelenting calm.

They all know some things, but really in moments like these they realize that actually…they don’t.

To fill the silence, Ted ( Read more... )

fanfiction, brotp, himym darkfic

Comments 15

tempestdance May 31 2009, 20:44:13 UTC

Oh... I think I know what's going on. :[
But I guess me saying it here is a spoiler?

Nice job! So...
More! More! More! :D

stablergirl June 1 2009, 14:47:30 UTC

lol well it's getting less and less mysterious with each chapter so you know, spoil away I guess right? Plus the title kind of gives it away ;-)

Thank you glad you like it! More soon I hope.

melroseee June 1 2009, 00:00:07 UTC

THIS MUST BE CONTINUED ASAP. Because 1) I don't totally know whats happening yet and I really want to. 2) It's so darn intriguing!!

stablergirl June 1 2009, 14:48:10 UTC

thank you!! I'm working on the next chapter today so keep your eyes peeled, it should be ready soon enough ;-) Glad you're liking the intrigue

dreamsofspike June 1 2009, 02:37:53 UTC

oh man poor robin :( im glad at least barney is on her side, trying to help her here... i especially loved your descriptions of his voice... :) very well done, hon, can't wait for more :)

stablergirl June 1 2009, 14:49:09 UTC

thanks, I know gotta have Barney on her side ;-) more soon!

andrea198 June 1 2009, 07:29:57 UTC

Love it! Cryptic and angsty all at once. Esp. love how you've included "the Walrus and the Carpenter", I used to effing love that when I was a kid. But now the only stanza I can remember by heart is "'the time has come,' the Walrus said..."

Update soon!

andrea198 June 1 2009, 07:33:51 UTC

Whoops! Forgot to point out my lone criticism-- it's "deer" in the headlights, not "dear". :)

stablergirl June 1 2009, 14:53:32 UTC

lol thank you a million times. fixed!

stablergirl June 1 2009, 14:50:12 UTC

thank you! yeah I loved that poem as a kid too and thought, ok what childhood poems and nursery rhymes could also be super creepy? And there it was waiting ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting I so appreciate it! More soon.

idioticonion June 1 2009, 13:54:55 UTC

I liked that, when Barney figured out there was something going on (I'm assuming that Robin's dad abused her in some way, or abused her sister or mom?) that he backed off and just let Robin run. Great character choice and great story telling. Loved it.

stablergirl June 1 2009, 14:53:11 UTC

ugh yes that's my favorite part. that he just says "ok get out of here. I'll fix this." so great. I'm sure you could look at it in a way that seems like he's enabling her to hide from her fears, but I don't look at it that way so...

Thanks for reading and commenting, I always love to know what you think!