The Stasis of Benches

Mar 01, 2010 23:55

Title: The Stasis of Benches
Author: Stablergirl
Fandom: Bones
Characters: Booth, Brennan
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Genre: UST, Romance, Inner-monologue
Rating: E for Everyone
Prompt: 03. a park bench @ story_lottery 
Summary: Booth and Brennan have a cryptic conversation while stuck in traffic.
Spoilers: Vague spoilers for Season 4.
Warnings: Just the usual warnings for ( Read more... )

bones, lottery, fanfiction, booth/brennan

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damelola March 2 2010, 05:25:43 UTC
Beautiful. There's a patient, calm tone to it that I think reflects Brennan's dream perfectly.

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stablergirl March 14 2010, 21:38:57 UTC
Thank you! I'm not usually the best at writing "calm" so I'm really glad it came through in this. Thanks for the feedback!

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snogged March 2 2010, 05:56:09 UTC
This was just...utterly and completely fantastic.

I even found myself tearing up at the end as you repeated a section from earlier.
She buried him once.

She sat in waiting rooms.

She clasped her hands tightly and sat beside him while machines beeped and codes were called for the patient next door.

And she doesn't know why, but she’s been thinking of him more often than before.

On top of that, I think you nailed Brennan's characterization perfectly. I love how she seems so calm and yet excited about her newly trained abilities in human emotion and observation.

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stablergirl March 14 2010, 21:39:54 UTC
Ha! Thanks yeah her new "human" abilities are shining through, so funny. Thank you so much for always reading and reviewing, you're the best.

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specialagentldy March 2 2010, 06:10:39 UTC
:::Melts:::

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stablergirl March 14 2010, 21:40:08 UTC
;-)

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ladychi March 2 2010, 06:53:32 UTC
This was so very them. Absolutely gorgeous. Well done.

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stablergirl March 14 2010, 21:40:30 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

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jeovajired March 2 2010, 07:10:16 UTC
beautiful! really beautiful!

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stablergirl March 14 2010, 21:40:48 UTC
Thanks!

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