Fever

[stablergirl]

Title: Fever
Author: Stablergirl
Rating: MA
Warnings: Adult content, adult language.  General smut.
Disclaimer: The characters and show do not belong to me.  No infringement intended.
Spoilers: Up to and including The Leap
Author's Notes: Dirty dirty dirty.  Set in the summer after The Leap, this is a little Barney and Robin tryst that I couldn't get out

Comments

[the_spin]

I am so massively behind on fic, but this was a delightful read! I'm so glad I clicked :) I love the back-and-forth you have going with Barney and Robin, and your take on Robin's voice is so great. Plus, Ted is hilarious.

[stablergirl]

Yeah I can relate to being behind, but I'm so glad you clicked on this one as well and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!! I always like to throw a little witty!Ted into my brotp stories for some reason, I think because there's prior tension that I like to imagine resolving itself or something. Anyway, thanks for the comment and for reading ;-) Anything in the works from you??? I love your stories so much...

[the_spin]

I am always a proponent of more Ted! You are so right that he throws interesting wrinkles into Barney/Robin stuff. And sadly no, I'm not really working on anything right now because of school plus a full-time job that I have a long commute to, ugh. Hopefully things will slow down later in my semester and I'll get a chance to read more and write!

[brandyleigh]

This was fantastic! So very hot, wow, and great imagery - I could totally see this party in my head. I loved Robin teasing Barney, and all of the dialogue between the two of them was perfect, as was the sex. I loved the ending too, with Robin saving her "I love you" for later. Ted was great, too.

[stablergirl]

Thank you so much, it was so important to me with this fic that I paint the picture of the environment and the sort of lair where the encounter took place, so I'm glad that came across for you. Thanks a million again for leaving a comment, it's way more exciting for me than it should be ;-)

[secondmezzanine]

Oooh, this was really fantastically well written and steamy and atmospheric. Lovely to read! And oh yeah-- HOT!

[stablergirl]

Thanks! Great compliment from you, I am honored!!! ;-)

[crazygorgeous13]

oh so hot! Absolutely just... wow. *goes to take a cold shower*

OMG I wish we could see something like this. I can just see millions of fan-girls turning into puddles of gooey Barney/Robin hotness. I want that dress. And I play pool quite often, and I can safely say nothing of that awesomeness has ever happenned to me. Can you write my life?? kthanks!

[stablergirl]

lol RIGHT? If we could see something like this on the show I think I would spontaneously combust, but I guess that's what fanfic is for right? To possimpible the impossible. ugh yes that dress is amazing, and I also play a little pool sometimes and have yet to do the nasty in the middle of it. I'm not ruling it out as a possibility. And I would be happy to write your life!! lol thanks for this comment, made me smile!

[idioticonion]

This is amazing - so much your voice but so different from your long-form story (speaking of which - next part please???).

I really do think this is one of the best Robin POV sex scenes I've ever read. And I'd like to include this in my greatest fic list.

[stablergirl]

Thank you so much, I always get nervous about this issue of voice and how it might seep from one piece to another, so I'm glad to hear you saw the similarities but that it was still different. (ugh I know, I'm working on it. writing and re-writing as always, but more soon I hope within the next week.)

I would be honored to have this on the greatest fic list (I can't believe it!) Thank you so so much a million times!