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st_minority

"Cleansing" - ch. 21

Sep 02, 2009 19:19

Title: Cleansing (ch. 21)
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Tom/Doug, OCs
Disclaimer: I don't own 21 Jumpstreet, nor it's characters. All belong to Callen and peeps.
Warnings: M/M, slash, angst, language, dub-con
Summary: After having killed a teen, Doug tries to comfort his partner. Neither had any idea of the harsh consequences that were to ( Read more... )

21 jump street, m/m, cleansing, fic, slash, fanfic, angst, tom/doug

Comments 13

rose_melody2 September 3 2009, 04:34:35 UTC

So glad to see an update! Good chapter. :)

Keep on writin'.

st_minority September 7 2009, 02:27:53 UTC

Thank ya, darlin'. :D

your story kidouchi September 3 2009, 11:25:00 UTC

Hot ! It's very hot ! But why Doug left our poor Tommy all alone?

Please write soon the next chapter .

Re: your story st_minority September 7 2009, 02:28:47 UTC

Cause Doug's just a little bit of a dick right now. lol He doesn't know what he wants!

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st_minority September 7 2009, 02:29:41 UTC

Of course it's a word! In the fandom world. lol
Thanks! So nice to hear you're enjoying it. ;) More? Definitely. Soon? I don't know....:/

Another great chapter mariatenebre September 4 2009, 01:58:51 UTC

Ooh this was probably the hottest chapter that you have written so far. I must say thought the more I begin to hate Doug in this story. Because he is straight trifleing, he is having sex with Tom while still dating another woman. Worst of all he just seems to be using Tom and then going back to his buisness. He is the epitomy of what a DL man is. It almost seems as though Tom is just his "hit it and get it and go about your buisness" type person. Also Tom needs to get some balls when these bigots and idiots bother him and start laying into them. Other wise he will be nothing more then the perpetual victim.

Re: Another great chapter st_minority September 7 2009, 02:32:27 UTC

Yeah? For some reason, it felt different writing the sex this time. I thought it was a little hotter; glad to know I'm not alone!! :D

It would seem Doug is using Tom as a booty call. And that is wrong. No one's treating Tom all too well at the moment. Poor guy.

Re: Another great chapter mariatenebre September 8 2009, 04:47:17 UTC

Ohh girlfriend this fic was steaming!
I know honestly in this story it seems that no one is doing right by Tom and as much as he can annoy me he really dosen't deserve this scadalous shit from Doug. Honestly I don't see why he dosen't leave Doug for another man. I think that Ioki, Booker or Fuller wouldn't treant Tom in such as shady way or be DL.

Re: Another great chapter st_minority September 8 2009, 05:28:35 UTC

Thank you! Puts a big grin on my face to know that I can write porn that people will find hot. LOL

No one deserves such scandalous shit like Doug is doing. Not Tom or Doug's "girlfriend" of the moment. Hmm....how would Booker treat Tom? Not that it'll happen in this fic, but maybe down the road I'll try some Booker/Tom. :)

Thread 7

fadezaway January 2 2011, 20:04:25 UTC

I don't suppose it'll help get an update if I say I love this story and I love you? Please? I just discovered 21 Jump Street on my Christmas break and thought hell, Doug (god, I always type 'dough') and Tom have a pretty steamy relationship. So I got on here and was immediately directed to this story and immediately addicted. I'm not usually one for torturing a character so much but for some reason I'm so into this! And also, Doug (I did it again! Dough!) can't just leave him. Harsh! Bad Doug, bad!

Anyway, I hope everything's going good with you and I do selfishly hope for an update eventually and that you haven't given up on it.