Pursuit of happiness

[st_hilman]

Nothing personal and nothing wild,
Past defeats I left behind,
Mind games will make me smile,
By taking eyes from common lies.
I am dealing with prospecting sense,
To encourage my existence,
Moreover hopes, believes and cries
Only help to other lives.
My own struggled inside me
Hence, the happiness has its fee -
You must work to see prosperity in

Comments

[sunrin]

"I need to leave all my troubles behind," - and so on. Make it more exact, for it now looks like a boneless creature which is falling apart by the air pressure.

[st_hilman]

Thanks for feedback. Finally I'm back to LJ. As you think, that this is fuzzy, what do you think then about 'Past defeats I left behind'?

[sunrin]

ничё не думаю. помидорку кушаю.

[st_hilman]

Приятного аппетита...Я вот помидорок не сажал в этом году, также как и прошлом, позапрошлом... Давно это было, самолёты тогда еще ровно летали, и жил я далеко от сюда…

But in general, thanks for advice, I found it useful...