Such a sad first chapter. My heart really goes out to wolfram. That was a really unexpected twist at the end as well. Anyway, there were only a few grammar mistakes but it was very good and enjoyable. I look forward to the next chapter.
Thank you. Sorry about the grammar mistake. I had tried to edit it, but I admit I am quite bad at it...=< It took me about the same amount to edit as to write a story..(clumsy me..)
Have I told you how much i love this story :D I do hope is Wolfram centric that guy has been threw a lot to get Yuuri to pay attention to him X3 and I'm hoping Flurin helps him out because Wolfram needs to be taken care of and Gisela seems to be his only true friend T.T can't wait for the next chapter XD maybe Wolfram meets some one who would make him happy which would later hurt Yuuri >.< I know I like to make Yuuri suffer XDD muahaha
Thank you => Yuuri is not that bad, although he really need a wake up call =p. I almost finished writing chapter 2 but I don't know when I can finish and post it, since lately I got a lot to do =
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