What a beautiful and interesting story! At the first few sentences, I was wondering if I would like it or not, because I'm not such a sci fi fan... but I loved the story, and loved your writing. You give such a sense of wonder, both on approaching the ship, and especially during the memories. Like others, I too am curious as to what happens next, however I think the way you framed this is simply perfect, with a new life waiting ahead for Severus and Hermione.
One phrase stood out, by the way, and will remain with me: It's a beautiful thing, watching Severus Snape do magic.
That image of Hermione watching him as he tries to peel back the ward's layers, shedding some of his own layers, is really a lovely word picture.
Oh, yes. I want to see Snape cast magic and feel his magical aura flare brightly around me. It makes me so glad to know that the picture I saw in my mind of that scene came across so well for you.
One phrase stood out, by the way, and will remain with me:
It's a beautiful thing, watching Severus Snape do magic.
That image of Hermione watching him as he tries to peel back the ward's layers, shedding some of his own layers, is really a lovely word picture.
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Thank you!
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