The Witch Doctor Incident
Title: The Witch Doctor Incident
Fandom: Danny Phantom
Rating: PG-13
Summary: January 12th, 2006: The darkest day in the Patrol's history. On that Danny Phantom and five Ghost Hunters entered the ghost zone to rescue fifteen kidnapped children. This isn't a joyride, people, this is hell. Set in my Orbits of Glass Universe.
( Chapter One )
Fandom: Danny Phantom
Rating: PG-13
Summary: January 12th, 2006: The darkest day in the Patrol's history. On that Danny Phantom and five Ghost Hunters entered the ghost zone to rescue fifteen kidnapped children. This isn't a joyride, people, this is hell. Set in my Orbits of Glass Universe.
( Chapter One )
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I love the Witch Doctor Incident.
Constructive criticism:
I have trouble keeping that many characters straight, but you don't seem to. (They don't get ignored and they stay 'in character').
I'd ask what his parents think Danny's doing while he's on the mission, but I've read OoG. You could mention that in this story...unless it gets covered in later chapters.
I guess I'm vaguely surprised Danny admits he doesn't live in the Ghost Zone. Where do the Hunters think he lives instead? (I don't think the truth would go over very well...)
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Right now I'm still trying to post and organize everything so Orbits is missing.
In this story (I forgot to mention it, crap) Danny's parnts don't know he's Phantom and it's set as an AU to season 2.
You know, I never thought of what the Hunters would think about Danny's home. Janet kinda knew (haven't written that story yet) but Jacobs doesn't. I would have to think about that.
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