Fic: Untitled (two moments)

[squills]

Title: Untitled (two moments) 
Rating: NC-17 
Word count: 1300
Warnings: Smut. Porn. Angst - really twisted angst.
Pairing: Mohinder/Peter, Mohinder/Sylar
Spoilers: First season
Disclaimer: Not my characters, not writing this for profit. 
Notes: After the  Sekrit Cabal Porn Battle at 

Comments

[ex_nothingto835]

OMFGFLAIL!

This was exactly what I needed- smut with a twist. Mylar has been so quiet recently, and I've been dying for a fic like this. I love how you write the actual act of sex. Does that sound weird? It's not meant to sound weird. You do it so prettily.

Also? It's SO GOOD I don't even care that it has Moheter.

[squills]

Thanks so much! That didn't sound weird at all. I always think it's more fun not to give detailed descriptions of every single thing that happens--it leaves more to your imagination, that way. ;0)

Also? It's SO GOOD I don't even care that it has Moheter.

I was nervous about including that bit, because I was afraid people would end it saying, "Ew...MOHETER??? And implied PETLAR???" But it just made sense as a sequel to the first part, and it's definitely Mylar since Mo is pining away, so...I left it in.

[motsureru]

As always, excellently done smut is an asset to the community. ^~ Rather, smut that manages to have a sort of twist that makes it more endearing than the average smut. This was awesomly done. It leaves a lot of open room to wonder about who's really whom and what sort of mental processes accompany lives like theirs, after what's gone on between them. Excellent work.

[squills]

I started this before the second season and it really did come out of my musings about the characters and how they might have been changed by everything that happened. I worried about the second part not being Mylar enough, since it's really about Mohinder being alone and empty and once again willing to live with a lie about Sylar's identity in order to find comfort. But it just seemed like a natural place for him to end up after what happened in the first part.

Thank you, very much. Praise from you is very nice!

[ej_fanart]

Wow!

Angsty and so beautifully written! :)

[squills]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

[furius]

I've been waiting for a new fic from you for a while and it's worth every moment.

I love the Mohinder in this, a man capable of great treachery. He's knows it's sick and twisted but he can't stop himself. Ah, the essence of Mylar..

The last line's implication that Sylar's been used by both (for sex, no less) is wonderful.

[squills]

Oh, wow. Thank you!!!

I've seen Mohinder as still being good at the core, but being pushed and pulled by everything that's happened to do things he never thought he would be capable of. It's sick and twisted, but yet he has to have it.

The last line's implication that Sylar's been used by both (for sex, no less) is wonderful.
I don't think this needs a sequel since it's just porn, but I imagined Mohinder turning over all the possibilities of Peter's remarks and being driven to find out the truth. Is Sylar alive? If so, is he imprisoned somewhere? Is that where Peter spends his time? Did Peter's comment about this "killing" Sylar simply mean that he'd be jealous of someone else being with Mohinder? Or is it the other way around...what if Sylar's alive and free but wants Peter instead of Mohinder, and Peter was just gloating over the fact that he's got power over both of them? I don't know...maybe there is an actual plotted sequel in there.

Thanks for reading.

[mistressmerr]

Did Peter's comment about this "killing" Sylar simply mean that he'd be jealous of someone else being with Mohinder? Or is it the other way around...what if Sylar's alive and free but wants Peter instead of Mohinder, and Peter was just gloating over the fact that he's got power over both of them?
The way I interpreted it was that Sylar's leaving Mohinder alone, convinced that he hates him, and it would kill him to learn that Mohinder had actually been wanting him all that time.

I adored this, btw.

[squills]

The way I interpreted it was that Sylar's leaving Mohinder alone, convinced that he hates him, and it would kill him to learn that Mohinder had actually been wanting him all that time.

Now, that wasn't a possibility I had thought of. But I had deliberately worded Peter's sentences so that they could be interpreted in a number of different ways, and would raise questions in Mohinder. Maybe I subconsciously wanted to write a sequel when I did that...

I'm glad you liked it!

[amandasaitou]

This is very good, a bit sad on the second installment, but really good!

[squills]

I feel bad because I always seem to leave Mohinder sad and wounded. But I'm just not sure it's possible for them to have any sort of happy ending!

Thanks a lot...I'm glad you liked it.