FIC: "Best Laid Plans" R/D, NC-17

[squidlytales]

Title: Best Laid Plans
Author: le_calmar_geant
Pairing: Ron/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: buttsex?
Words: 3525
Disclaimer: Not mine
Prompt: 86. Ron has had an unrequited crush on Harry for years, but knowing that Harry is straight, he has never done anything about it. On his 25th birthday, he decides that there are other fit men out there, and goes to a gay bar

Comments

[kerryblaze]

HAHA! Great humor, perfect smut, in character, I couldn't ask for more!

[tehgiantsquid]

Thank you so much! :)))

[cluelessinlife]

Tee Hee that was hot and funny! I loved it :)

[tehgiantsquid]

Thank you! :D

[aylaranzz]

Fantastic! I loved the beginning and the end especially. Ron and Draco's different points of view. And of course the middle of excellent too. Clueless Ron is so cute. lol.

[tehgiantsquid]

Thanks so much! :))

[letmypidgeonsgo]

woo hoo! who needs a beta, that was perfect! the dialogue to open & close it was very different - i loved it!

one ickle thing though: the {i think} 2 times you use the word 'prostate' you have 'prostrate' instead

[tehgiantsquid]

LMAO That's why I need a beta. I'll fix it asap. Thanks for the review!

[florahart]

there's also a "there" cocks rubbing together.

And yes, this is lovely and funny and so nice with the Stop looking at me like that first person sections. :D

[tehgiantsquid]

Eek, that's a bad one. Thank you for pointing it out to me. I'll fix it asap :))

And thank you so much for the review! :DD I'm glad you liked it!

[secretsolitaire]

Hee, this was fabulous! I loved getting to hear both Ron and Draco's voices at the beginning/end. Your Ron was adorable, and your Draco was wonderfully IC. Thanks for making me smile.

[tehgiantsquid]

Thank you so much! :)) I'm glad you liked it!