Title: Put Me Back Together
Part: Chapter 21: Free For All
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kurt/Puck, Burt Hummel, Mercedes Jones, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Emma Pillsbury, Will Schuester, Tina Cohen-Chang, Artie Abrams, Rachel Berry, Santana Lopez, Brittany, Mike Chang, Matt Rutherford
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Things will pick up? I thought it was up. :(
LOL, sappy songs and a happily ever after. That would be lovely. We shall see...
Thank you!
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Oh, Squeeka, what you're doing to me. *sighs*
Very very good chapter, as usual I have to say ! I realized, once again, how much I loved your writing, your style, because I thought "well, usually, I would just feel like kicking Kurt's ass for being such a drama-queen in other fanfictions, but I just can't in PMBT !". And you know why ? Because it's so, so brilliantly written I just can't be mad at Kurt. When you actually feel what a character is going through, you just cannot be insensitive to their feelings.
I really appreciate that Kurt and Puck sang to each other, and how slowly Kurt came to realize Puck wasn't such an ass, after all.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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What am I doing? Hmmm... Hopefully I'm making you think and feel. Am I? Am I?
Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it (not to mention my style and writing). I know Kurt was a total diva, but I'm glad that you were able to deal with that. :P And it makes me so happy to know that you can feel what they're going through. That's so important to me.
Awww, good. I'm glad you liked the singing. And the slow pace. :D
Thanks again. More soon-ish.
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You are, you are. It's always a big moment to read a new chapter, you don't even know how important it is. XD
Well, I like your Kurt, so yeah, I can forgive him. After all, what he's been going through, it's all normal, isn't it ? I mean, he was hurt and upset, therefore I can understand why he behaved this way.
Can't waaait. :D
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Oh, good! I'm so glad. :D Awwww, that's so nice to hear. I mean, PMBT is important to me, obviously. But to know that it's important to you is so awesome.
HAHA, right. I agree. And yeah, he's been through so much in this. I think he deserves a little break.
YAY! Sadly though, it's not gonna be up next week. I'm just.... I need a break. :'(
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seriously anticipating the next chapter can't wait!!! your writing as ever is amazing!!!! your the best love you!!!!!!!
but kurt really needs to explain everything to mercedes and soon, i can't believe nobody else noticed kurt's stop starting through his song or the intense eye contact between him and puck, are they blind?
love and reviews and hugs 4ever!
emiz xxxxxxxxxxx
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Awww, yay! Thank you so much. It's always so nice to hear that people enjoy my writing. :D
Yeah, I agree. Kurt definitley needs to open up to someone.
Well, no one saw Kurt becuase Kurt was looking straight ahead. Plus, everyone was looking at Puck. He was the one singing after all.
Ducks and kisses! Thanks so much for your lovely review.
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Yay! Kurt is finally over being angry and see's the light!! YUS!!!!
I have to say I absolutely loved the parallel between Betty and Bob from white christmas and Kurt and Puck. Like in terms of when Kurt is singing the song and comes to the same conclusion that betty eventually did in white christmas when she went back to Bob. I loved that you have Kurt come to that realization that that might be his case as well. With that being said I also loved that Puck responded to Kurt with his song "I Don't Want To Let You Go" very appropriate I felt! I especially loved the line, “Even if it’s a hundred years before you change your mind. I will be here waiting girl until the end of time.”Just... *sigh* I don't know why but that just felt soo romantic to me! I'd totally melt and not being angry anymore if I had a boy singing that lyric to me, lemme tell you lol ( ... )
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I agree and second your YAY! Kurt has definitley seen the light. A lovely Puck shaped light. :D
Why thank you! I have to be honest, when I originally picked that song, I didn't realize the paralells. It wasn't until I went and wactched and re-watched that scene in the movie that the light bulb went on. I have to say, I'm really happy with how that worked out. Such a happy accident.
Le sigh... Isn't that line beautiful. Isn't that whole song beautiful? I love it. I can't even tell you how much I love that song. That scene actually wrote itself around the song. Honestly, I would melt as well. And I'm not a romantic person by any means! But that song gets to me.
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're still enjoying it. HAHA, getting specific with your wishes now, are you? :P
Next Thursday? Yeah... There won't be a chapter this coming Thursday. *cowers in fear* My brain is fried crispy. And if I don't take some time to get my head together, things will ( ... )
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