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(Put Me Back Together) Please (20/?)

Jul 29, 2010 13:35

Title: Put Me Back Together
Part: Chapter 20: Please
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kurt/Puck, Burt Hummel, Mercedes Jones, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Emma Pillsbury, Will Schuester, Tina Cohen-Chang, Artie Abrams, Rachel Berry, Santana Lopez, Brittany, Mike Chang, Matt Rutherford
Author’s Note: The title and opening ( Read more... )

(character) will schuester, (character) rachel berry, (character) artie abrams, (character) santana lopez, (chaptered fic) put me back together, (fandom) glee, (ship) kurt/puck, (character) matt rutherford, (character) finn hudson, (character) kurt hummel, (character) noah "puck" puckerman, (character) mike chang, (author) squeeka, (character) quinn fabray, (character) emma pillsbury, (character) brittany s. pierce, (character) mercedes jones, (character) burt hummel, (character) tina cohen-chang

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firefox1490 July 29 2010, 19:00:27 UTC

You know part of me is sort of scare of what Puck is going to do to make Kurt listen. Not that I think he'll do anything bad mind you but somehow I think whatever he does is going to make me cry. Kurt needs to listen to him and idk what to do about Mercedes but something.

keeper_of_stars July 31 2010, 03:29:30 UTC

Don't be scared! Really, there's no reason to be. Though, I guess I should say, I don't know how easily you cry... :P

Yes, Kurt does need to listen. And he needs to lighten up on Mercedes. Whether he'll do either of these things is another story. ;)

Thanks so much!

firefox1490 July 31 2010, 05:07:23 UTC

I cry at the drop of a hat its sort of really pathetic to be honest. And Puck/Kurt fic keeps making me sad! I swear everything I read is either fluff, smut or depressing stuff or some combination of the three.

keeper_of_stars July 31 2010, 05:09:50 UTC

.... uh oh.

Yeah. Well then. :P

The fluff stuff makes you sad even? Or are they sweet, sentimental tears?

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geeky_ramblings July 29 2010, 19:32:53 UTC

Man Kurt is so stubborn!!! Mercedes needs to lock these two in a closet somewhere just so they can talk1!!

keeper_of_stars July 31 2010, 03:30:30 UTC

LOL, yeah. He does have a stubborn streak to him. HAHAHA, she'd have to manage to get Kurt there first! :P

Thank you!

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keeper_of_stars July 31 2010, 03:44:00 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I was going for tense. :)

I'm glad that you liked that this one scene was a whole chapter. It needed to be, really. To be honest, this scene wasn't in my original layout for this story. But when I looked at where I was and where I needed to be, I realized that this had to happen. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.

I hope you like what happens next! I've been looking forward to posting the next chapter for a while now. Wow, thank you! That's such a huge compliment. LOL, I do love keyboard smashing. :D

Thanks again! :D

na_shao July 29 2010, 20:55:44 UTC

Puck, I definitely love you. Thank God, he finally managed to push Kurt to listen to him.
You don't know how happy and relieved I felt when I read this chapter ! Even though I understood why Kurt was behaving like this, and why he was so stubborn about not wanting to listen to Puck, I couldn't help feeling annoyed and irritated while reading his thoughts. I'm glad he finally kind of "came to terms" with this because of the talk they had. I loved the fact that Puck was so strong through this, and that he pushed Kurt to his limits. HOORAY FOR PUCK.

I.can't.wait to read the next part. It's growing more and more interesting at this point. <3

keeper_of_stars July 31 2010, 03:58:02 UTC

HAHAHA. Puck is dumb, but he ain't stupid. :P

LOL, I can imagine. I know how relieved I was to post it! Trust me, it was quite frustrating for me as well. :P Kurt needed to get a heaping scoop of Comeuppance for how he's been acting. And it was definitley time for it.

I'm really glad that you liked their conversation and how Puck handeled it. I've been wanting to get this chapter out there for a while now.

I hope so! I really hope that you're still interested.

Thanks so much. :)

kirke_novak July 29 2010, 20:58:20 UTC

I could never tell you enough how perfect this fic is. The emotions you create between characters, each and every single one of them, is completely believable, in character, exactly what 16 years old would and could say and feel in such moments. None of them is perfect or more right than the other; Mercedes made mistakes, Kurt made mistakes, Puck and Finn made them... They act childish, they act mature, I can almost think "yeah, I think that's how I'd have felt if that had happened to 16yo me".

You are brilliant and so is this.

keeper_of_stars July 31 2010, 04:02:07 UTC

I just... I don't deserve such wonderful praise! I really don't! Your kindess and support just blows me away. Thank you so, so much. *hugs*

I'm really happy that you like the emotions and how they relate to the different characters. Not to mention how happy it makes to know you like my characterization. Those are both really important to me. I really strive to write realalistic, believeable, flawed, human characters. I don't want anyone to be perfect. Becuase that just isn't real. I want this to be relateable. And knowing that you think it is... WOW.

Really, thank you so much. I really don't think that I can say that enough. :D