(Put Me Back Together) Pocket Squares (13/?)

May 06, 2010 12:46

Title: Put Me Back Together
Part: Chapter 13: Pocket Squares
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kurt/Puck, Burt Hummel, Mercedes Jones, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Emma Pillsbury, Will Schuester, Tina Cohen-Chang, Artie Abrams, Rachel Berry, Santana Lopez, Brittany, Mike Chang, Matt Rutherford
Author’s Note: The title and ( Read more... )

(character) will schuester, (character) rachel berry, (character) artie abrams, (character) santana lopez, (chaptered fic) put me back together, (fandom) glee, (ship) kurt/puck, (character) matt rutherford, (character) kurt hummel, (character) noah "puck" puckerman, (character) mike chang, (author) squeeka, (character) quinn fabray, (character) emma pillsbury, (character) mercedes jones, (character) burt hummel, (character) tina cohen-chang

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na_shao May 6 2010, 19:18:39 UTC
Oh my goodness, I fucking love you. ♥

This chapter was awesome in every possible way. I absolutely loved the fact that no one stood up for Puck except Kurt, and also adored how he silently fought with Mercedes (she disappointed me, I must say ! every gleek disappointed me, in fact.). It was very well done and the tension created between them was such a powerful moment.

Of course, the end was absolutely amazing. I love you so much for brightening my dull day just by writing. It shows, in your words, how talented, precise on the details you are. We lack of people like you who can just create atmospheres that say more than words could.
You never, never cease to amaze me. Every chapter is so wonderful and gives, little by little, so much about Puck and Kurt's building relationship.

Their embrace ... just ... argh. Brilliant.

Thank you again and again. I feel like I always say the same things in my review, but ... what can I add ?

♥♥♥

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keeper_of_stars May 12 2010, 04:55:46 UTC
...... WOW! Thank you so much, lol! I love you as well. :D

I... Honestly, I have to no idea how respond! Your review just blows me away! Thank you again. Let me see if I can put something coherent together. :P

I'm glad that you that no one but Kurt stood up for Puck. I was a little on the fence about Artie, but then I decided to go with group think. Becuase really, isn't that what usually happens? As sad as that may be. And the silent fight between Kurt and Mercedes... I'm so sorry she dissapointed you! But... It had to happened. I'm just glad you liked the way it played out.

The end. That is one of the moments that I've had planned since the very beginning of this fic. Before I wrote a single word, I planned out the whole story (save for a few scenes here and there). And that moment was one of the ones that have always been there. I'm really glad that after waiting so long to write it, that it actually worked.

As for brightening your day, you do the same for me! I really can't tell you how much your kind words mean to me. And ( ( ... )

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shizam_i_am May 6 2010, 19:38:28 UTC
wow. amazing chapter, seriously. i loved the theme of "needing" and kurt's realization at the end. and you captured puck's looks of needing kurt so well, i could not only see them but feel them as well.

great job, thank you so much for posting and sharing. i can't wait to read more. ♥

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keeper_of_stars May 12 2010, 21:39:08 UTC
Why thank you! I really apprecaite that. :D I'm glad that you liked the theme. I don't even remember if I did that on purpose, but I'm happy you liked how it worked out. :D

Thanks again! :D

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marimaripoliana May 6 2010, 19:38:42 UTC
OMGGGG
how could everybody be so STUPID ?!?!??!?! *angry*

Own Puck ;-; *hug*

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keeper_of_stars May 12 2010, 21:40:09 UTC
LOL, it's all about the group think. :P Sorry, but it had to happen.

Thank you! (And hugs Puck right along with you.)

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xastralxromance May 6 2010, 19:51:45 UTC
I just started hoping on the Glee fanfiction wagon and this was one of the first stories I read and I am sold. You've done an incredible job with this story, with the portrayal and with the characters. I couldn't read it and /not/ comment because you absolutely deserve some praise for what you've created. This is incredible and you've done a brilliant job. <3

Can't wait for more. I'm addicted.

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keeper_of_stars May 13 2010, 19:54:25 UTC
Oh, wow! Thank you so much! I'm glad that your first forays into Glee fan fiction have been good ones. Because really, bad fic right from the off is a total turn off, no?

And I'm really glad that you're enjoy this and that you like my characterization. I put a lot of effort into making them feel right.

Thanks again. :)

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xfindyourlight May 6 2010, 20:11:20 UTC
Mmmmm, great chapter!

It sucks to be Puck right now. I can't believe they all babied Finn when he just punched Puck in the face! It's not all his fault.:( Poor dear.

The bathroom scene was lovely. Not too much, but just enough. It's a real start for them.

I can't wait for another chapter!

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keeper_of_stars May 13 2010, 19:57:12 UTC
Awwwww, thank you!

Yeah, Puck has got it rough right now. Poor thing. I felt bad that everyone turned on him as well, but it had to happen, you know?

Yay, I'm glad you liked the bathroom scene. I really enjoyed writing it. And it is definitley progress.

Thanks again. More soon-ish.

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