Title: Put Me Back Together
Part: Chapter 13: Pocket Squares
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kurt/Puck, Burt Hummel, Mercedes Jones, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Emma Pillsbury, Will Schuester, Tina Cohen-Chang, Artie Abrams, Rachel Berry, Santana Lopez, Brittany, Mike Chang, Matt Rutherford
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This chapter was awesome in every possible way. I absolutely loved the fact that no one stood up for Puck except Kurt, and also adored how he silently fought with Mercedes (she disappointed me, I must say ! every gleek disappointed me, in fact.). It was very well done and the tension created between them was such a powerful moment.
Of course, the end was absolutely amazing. I love you so much for brightening my dull day just by writing. It shows, in your words, how talented, precise on the details you are. We lack of people like you who can just create atmospheres that say more than words could.
You never, never cease to amaze me. Every chapter is so wonderful and gives, little by little, so much about Puck and Kurt's building relationship.
Their embrace ... just ... argh. Brilliant.
Thank you again and again. I feel like I always say the same things in my review, but ... what can I add ?
♥♥♥
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I... Honestly, I have to no idea how respond! Your review just blows me away! Thank you again. Let me see if I can put something coherent together. :P
I'm glad that you that no one but Kurt stood up for Puck. I was a little on the fence about Artie, but then I decided to go with group think. Becuase really, isn't that what usually happens? As sad as that may be. And the silent fight between Kurt and Mercedes... I'm so sorry she dissapointed you! But... It had to happened. I'm just glad you liked the way it played out.
The end. That is one of the moments that I've had planned since the very beginning of this fic. Before I wrote a single word, I planned out the whole story (save for a few scenes here and there). And that moment was one of the ones that have always been there. I'm really glad that after waiting so long to write it, that it actually worked.
As for brightening your day, you do the same for me! I really can't tell you how much your kind words mean to me. And ( ( ... )
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great job, thank you so much for posting and sharing. i can't wait to read more. ♥
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Thanks again! :D
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how could everybody be so STUPID ?!?!??!?! *angry*
Own Puck ;-; *hug*
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Thank you! (And hugs Puck right along with you.)
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Can't wait for more. I'm addicted.
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And I'm really glad that you're enjoy this and that you like my characterization. I put a lot of effort into making them feel right.
Thanks again. :)
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It sucks to be Puck right now. I can't believe they all babied Finn when he just punched Puck in the face! It's not all his fault.:( Poor dear.
The bathroom scene was lovely. Not too much, but just enough. It's a real start for them.
I can't wait for another chapter!
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Yeah, Puck has got it rough right now. Poor thing. I felt bad that everyone turned on him as well, but it had to happen, you know?
Yay, I'm glad you liked the bathroom scene. I really enjoyed writing it. And it is definitley progress.
Thanks again. More soon-ish.
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