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One Shot Fic: Petals

Nov 13, 2009 14:48

Title: Petals
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): James Wilson
Notes: Originally written for Round 3 of Wilson_fest (Prompt: Wilson/Cuddy - Sunflowers). Also written for alphabetasoup (K is for Kind).
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: The blooms were huge, bursting with bright yellow petals that radiated out from large, black centers.

( Petals )

(character) james wilson, (ship) wilson/cuddy, (author) squeeka, (ficathon) wilson fest, (ficathon) alphabetasoup, (fandom) house, (character) lisa cuddy

Comments 14

missing_lynk November 13 2009, 21:38:42 UTC

This. Was. INCREDIBLE. So beautifully written. Wilson was 100% in character, even without any dialouge. At first I simply thought it would be a W/C friendship fic, which would have been so perfect.

And then, and THEN you throw in that last amazing line and I died a little. Well done!!!!

keeper_of_stars November 14 2009, 05:02:32 UTC

Oh, wow! Thank you so much! :D

Dialogue.... Really, it's my weak point, lol. I find that I tend to just naturally stay away from it. And honestly, I hadn't even noticed there wasn't any in this until you mentioned it. :P

I'm glad you loved the last time. It just felt right. :D

srsly_yes November 13 2009, 21:46:15 UTC

Lovely fic. The ending was perfect.

keeper_of_stars November 14 2009, 05:07:18 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D

crimson_rx November 13 2009, 22:06:18 UTC

Beautiful!!

keeper_of_stars November 14 2009, 05:11:39 UTC

Thank you muchly!

Cute icon, by the way.

crimson_rx November 14 2009, 15:00:45 UTC

Thank you! :D

keeper_of_stars November 16 2009, 22:47:19 UTC

Welcome! :D

25lively November 14 2009, 02:31:23 UTC

I loved this. Buying Cuddy flowers to cheer her up seems like such a Wilson thing to do.

keeper_of_stars November 14 2009, 05:13:16 UTC

Awww, yay! I thought flowers felt right. :D

chase_austenfan November 14 2009, 19:57:31 UTC

Perfect!! Totally in character and I'm so happy to have found this! :) There was a part of me that was just SOO squeeing inside when Wilson and Cuddy were talking about she said that she needed someone dependable and I was thinking, "Errrrrrm- let's think about that" ;) lol!

Thanks again!

keeper_of_stars November 16 2009, 22:48:41 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I stive to keep things as in character as I possibly can, so that means a lot. :)

HEHE, me too! I kept thinking the same thing! I mean, come on! Mr. Dependanble was standing right there! :P