Comments | squeeka_quack: One Shot Fic: Sight

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One Shot Fic: Sight

Mar 26, 2009 13:24

Title: Sight
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Alice/Jasper
Note: This is dedicated to sirenprincess because she always inspires me to write the best fics I possibly can. And if it weren’t for her inspiration, this fic may never have been finished.
- This was originally written for twilight20 (Prompt: Belong).
Warning: N/A.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
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(fandom) twilight, (character) jasper hale, (other) gift fic, (author) squeeka, (ship) jasper/alice, (character) alice cullen, (ficathon) twilight20

Comments 18

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keeper_of_stars March 27 2009, 04:14:49 UTC

Thank you so much! I tried to give their past a different spin becuase it has been written soooo many times. I'm glad you liked it. :D

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keeper_of_stars March 30 2009, 21:54:38 UTC

Well good. I'm glad. :D

aerial312 March 27 2009, 01:57:22 UTC

This was lovely. I really liked how at the end, after she took Jasper's hand, Alice saw their future play out before her because the decision was made.

keeper_of_stars March 27 2009, 04:15:32 UTC

Aww, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked that bit. I had a lot of fun with it. :)

sirenprincess March 27 2009, 05:40:18 UTC

Oh my goodness, you just made me cry! I've never had a fic dedicated to me before! *hugs* Awwww!

I loved seeing an Alice background story. So many of us write Jasper backgrounds, and you really don't see enough Alice background stories out there. I particularly enjoyed seeing a bit of human!Alice. That's so rare.

I found it very, very interesting that you had Alice have a vision of Jazz before she was changed. They really were fated to be together from the very beginning.

My favorite line was "Jasper might not have known it, but he was searching for his other half. There was no other explanation. After years of learning about her power, she’d learned that she only saw the path that people were on at the time. And so, his path was leading him to her.". I loved, loved, loved that.

I'm so happy you shared this wonderful story with us.

keeper_of_stars March 30 2009, 21:57:30 UTC

Really?!?! I didn't mean to make you cry! And I'm suprised that you've never had fics dedicated to you before! I would think that people would be dedicating to you like crazy. *hugs*

That first vision didn't happen while she alive. It happened RIGHT after her heart stopped beating. Honestly, I'm just glad you liked it. I was really worried you wouldn't. *hugs again*

realynn8 March 27 2009, 09:41:38 UTC

Aww, this was great! I liked it a lot. Very well written. :)

keeper_of_stars March 30 2009, 21:57:54 UTC

Yay! Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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keeper_of_stars March 30 2009, 21:58:21 UTC

Thank you! :D

(Cute icon btw.)