Following, Part Twenty-Five [Jack/Juliet] [R/NC-17] [WIP]

Dec 11, 2010 20:26



“Of course I did,” he said, picking up the scissors and stretching the wet gauze between the shears before cutting through it, “which is exactly why I went into a specialty where I’d never have to do it again.”

She grinned, her eyes brightening with amusement.

“I don’t know, Jack: On a scale of intensity, I think most people would rate ( Read more... )

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nighttiming1022 December 12 2010, 03:54:51 UTC
Yay for an update!

lmao i <3 u for admitting that you want to write porn! I freely admit that I want to read teh porn! ;)

Anyway I think you've still got Juliet's voice because, though I LOVED the mush, my favorite line was Just waiting-and thinking that that makes you safe-is the most dangerous thing you can do.”

It seemed very level headed and reasonable both of which I believe Juliet to be.

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squeakyboots December 12 2010, 14:50:12 UTC
Squee! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it and thought Juliet was IC. I aim to please! ;)

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squeakyboots December 13 2010, 06:19:19 UTC
I'll do my best! ;)

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