Following, Part Eighteen [Jack/Juliet] [R] [WIP]

[squeakyboots]

Title: Following (Part Eighteen)
Characters: Juliet, Jack, Charlotte, Daniel, Hurley, Bernard, Rose, Ben, Claire...
Pairing: Juliet/Jack, hints of Charlotte/Daniel
Rating: R (PG-13 for this part)
Spoilers: Season 4, Season 5 (sort of)
A/N: This part is pretty short, but I'm posting now because this section is taking a really long time for me to

Comments

[nighttiming1022]

I am finding nutso!Claire thoroughly convincing because of this moment

“Jack-please,” She leaned forward suddenly, her eyes focusing for the first time, moving to look into his urgently, restlessly, “Do you think I haven’t- ” She broke off abruptly, releasing a shaky breath and pushing one hand through her lank hair

And, alfjewo;iaewjfewohewfjio more Christian angst for his kids! (there was nothing more eloquent to describe the sound I made when I realized it was Christian's shoes!)

“Did you take these from him? Did you see my father?” He could hear his voice shaking, getting louder

“They’re not yours, Jack,” Claire countered suddenly, with almost equal anger, as though she was determined to match his.

“What do you mean they’re not mine? He was my father!”

“He was my father too!”

LOVE LOVE LOVE it!

[squeakyboots]

YAY! I am so relieved that you liked it. I was nervous about posting this section because I wanted to do Claire justice! And I just couldn't resist using the shoes. :)

More to come soon!

[squeakyboots]

Thanks so much! I was hoping to keep Claire "on the edge" here -- kind of creepy and sympathetic at the same time. I'm glad that you found it so sinister! :)