csi fic: "only just a minute"

Feb 07, 2010 09:02

only just a minute, brass, brass/sofia, pg
the litany of lies he tells himself, grows longer and deeper until all that's left are the lies and wreckage of this story, 1200 words
Spoilers for 6x07, 6x08 - A Bullet Runs Through It

A/N: This was written for tos_lover who won over at the help_haiti auction. Thank you to her for her generosity and kind heart. I can only ( Read more... )

writing: csi fic

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smacky30 February 7 2010, 15:15:28 UTC
This is just amazing. You do the most beautiful things with words. I'm so glad that tos_lover asked for Brass. So glad. I squeed when I saw you had written CSI. Then I read it. And you slayed me. You should only ever write Brass. ;) Thank you for auctioning your talent and for sharing this.

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marcasite February 7 2010, 18:30:14 UTC
Thank you so so so much! I was nervous about this fic and really wanted to deliver something nice.

Thank you for your comment and support!

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cincoflex February 7 2010, 15:30:10 UTC
It's a beautiful, insightful and taut insight into Brass and you should be proud of this story. I am in awe.

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marcasite February 7 2010, 18:30:42 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a lovely and supportive comment! It really means a lot. Thanks!

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rowofstars February 7 2010, 20:28:00 UTC
I haven't read any CSI in fic in a long, long time, but I saw your name and I knew I wouldn't be disappointed. You write an amazing, introspective Brass and I love how you peel back a few of his layers as he wonders what kind of man he is. Brilliant.

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marcasite February 7 2010, 23:24:57 UTC
Wow, that has to be one of the nicest compliments I have ever received. Thank you so much for stopping to read this. Thank you for your insight and lovely comment. It really is appreciated. Thank you.

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mingsmommy February 7 2010, 21:40:01 UTC
This is too gorgeous for words. It is so real.

I think you've captured Brass so beautifully...this mix of pain and compassion and guilt and hope. It makes me ache.

The last section made me tear up...of all the years, all the episodes, all the fun/beautiful/shippy moments, the moment with Tracy Bell is my absolute favorite CSI moment and you brought to life beautifully what Brass must have been feeling.

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marcasite February 7 2010, 23:26:19 UTC
Thank you, thank you! I wasn't sure if I could get Brass the way he was but thank you! I hope tos_lover likes the story and I am so very happy that you do!

And thank you so much for your kind words in regards to Sierra the other day. we are so appreciative of your support.

*hugs*

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GASP! moochiecat2009 February 8 2010, 03:33:41 UTC
Holy cow, that was, simply, utterly amazing! Fantastic writing, fantastic premise, amazing presentation. You're amazing!

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Re: GASP! marcasite February 8 2010, 15:30:35 UTC
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I appreciate that you took the time to read and leave one.

Thanks!!

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