Missive for melusinahp

[spyfestadmin]

Author: loony-lucifer
Recipient: melusinahp
Title: Winter Wonderland
Characters/Pairing(s): Yassen/Alex
Summary: Yassen can be quite a pleasant man when he has an ulterior motive.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): Underage sex
Word Count: 4,184
Author's Notes: I tried to take your requests and turn them into a creepy yet realistic little scenario. I hope you enjoy this fic!

Comments

[annephoenix]

Dark, hot, a bit creepy, unexpected, unique -- I loved how different this story was without losing sight of the characters. Alex was deliciously *Alex* and Yassen, the ice-rink attendant, remained a Scorpia Assassin. Very enjoyable story!

[kennahijja]

Wow, that was different - realistic, creepy, seductive, evil. You did an amazing job setting up predator!Yassen, from the superb first line to the alternate persona he slips into. His Alex-watching is both scary and hot, and the way he traps Alex (and Alex's inability to resist the challenge) was so very much in character.

The sex works well and is ever-so-slightly unsettling because this once, Yassen isn't the controlled assassin, but quite undone by Alex. I really liked that Alex confesses his obsession too, and his confusion at the end. And yet Yassen's final manipulation is again so in character, and quite cruel in what it does to Alex... Very impressive stuff!

[grave_alice]

I love this story. It's kind of creepy and so, so hot. I admire the skillful and seemingly effortless way you develop the scene and the characters.

[miro_klose_pics]

What a gorgeous story! It is the first time I found something written from Yassen's POV and that brilliantly. Even though you wrote about a setup which would sound totally foreign at first glance for me it works and does definitely not feel not out of character - not when Yassen is so terribly infatuated with teenage Alex that he would go to any length to get him (or is that 'do him' ^_