Declassified file for lazy-neutrino

Apr 06, 2010 23:26

Author: Madam Uniqua
Recipient: lazy-neutrino
Title: Outcome
Characters/Pairing(s): No pairings, Alex, Wolf, Yassen, OMC
Summary: Wolf and Alex are a mission. They are racing against two companies. Scorpia and another anonymous crime organization. Someone has to win. And it's not going to be MI6.
Rating: T
Disclaimer: All Alex Rider characters herein are the ( Read more... )

fic, 2.0

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k155_me April 7 2010, 09:06:01 UTC
LOLOLOL classic ending! I can just imagine their faces when they opened the crate. Very well done, and... fyi... the scene where they are in the closet... :D i have some very dirty images to thank you for ;)

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anonymous April 8 2010, 23:32:56 UTC
Not bad of a story. You had a plot and everything. It got confused at some parts but always found my way back.

XD I liked the ending, just to let you know.

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hpstrangelove April 9 2010, 01:15:44 UTC
That was fun - I really did like the Yassen/Alex closet scene. Lots of action, and the ending, Alex being kidnapped and the crates everyone was so hot to find only have candy!

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lazy_neutrino April 9 2010, 19:10:32 UTC
Thank you very much for this - it really feels like it's been written for me because you've included all the things I asked for! I love the confusion here - everyone is working to their own agendas and there's more than just an Alex/bad guy conflict. One of the things I liked most about the first book was wondering (along with Alex) what on earth was going on and it was great to be thinking like that again as I read this: it was fast-moving and complex. Also, lots of Wolf, and a great Wolf, too - one of the high points of the story for me (with just a little Yassen to spice things up…). Thank you again, mystery writer - I really enjoyed my story! And I loved the ending.

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annephoenix April 11 2010, 19:57:25 UTC
A really good submission that I felt was lovely because of it's strong adherence to the request. Not many authors are able to draw together someone else's fic wishes with their own writing direction. Good action!

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