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[spuuky]

I like geese
Geese are neat
I like geese
They have flappy feet

Comments

[kenicky]

Why the extra syllables in the last line? May I suggest that you substitute is for "I like geese/without feet", instead; therefore invoking a better sense of the ridiculous - unless, of course, you are referring to paper guess pegged to a clothesline, dithering about in the wind.

[friendless1]

I kind of like the change in meter, and as an alliteration aficionado I find flappy feet just fine.