Fanfic: The Trial of Ben Wyatt

[spunkyar]

Title: “The Trial of Ben Wyatt”
Pairing: Ben's POV, Ben/Leslie
Word Count: approx. 700
Summary: ‘The Trial of Leslie Knope’ from Ben’s POV.

He had not seen or heard from her since that morning, but he knew she could feel his presence through the wall.

Comments

[curfewofthemind]

I loved this. It was great cause it highlighted how hard the trial must have been on ben. Though I would love to see Marlene's reaction.

[spunkyar]

Thank you so much! Of course I loved the episode, but I would have loved to at least see one scene or shot of Ben outside the courtroom. :)

[sullen_aquarian]

Thank you for writing this. Ben has such a huge presence in this episode, even though we don't see him for most of it. I liked the image of the rest of the department trying to comfort him. Hey, if you want to write a sequel where he talks to Marlene, that would be excellent : ).

[spunkyar]

Aww...thank you so much. I actually edited around and took a part out where he talked to Donna/Tom and the small beginnings of a conversation with Marlene to get this posted today, but I will definitely try to revisit it. I won't have any time until Monday to start that though.

Thank you again for your words of encouragement!

[talibusorabat]

Awwww Ben. ;.;

[spunkyar]

Thanks! :)

[kyrieanne]

So great! I am glad you wrote this and I like the line "now it was his turn to say screw it..." A great parallel.

Btw, LOVE Ron Pope. Thanks for the music!

[spunkyar]

Thanks Kyrie! It mean a lot to me that you liked this. Also you are like the queen of parallel's in your stories. Can't wait for more updates from you. :)

I'm glad you like Ron Pope. I got to see him in concert a couple weeks ago and there was like 25 people their total. At the end he took a bunch of pictures with use and signing our cds. It was great to really meet him. :)

[fromahippie]

I really liked this. Good job!

[spunkyar]

Thank you!