hannibal; abigail/will, abigail/marissa; r; mercy we abstain (1/1)

[danniisupernova]

title: mercy we abstain
fandom: hannibal
pairings: abigail/will, abigail/marissa shurr
rating: r
warnings: sexual content
summary: abigail reflects on her best friend and her father when will takes her back to minnesota.

Comments

[10millionpeople]

Holy...

Oh my gosh. While the Marissa parts took me a little off guard (I've never looked at it like that, their relationship- but you made me believe it!) the characterization was flawless with Abigail and Will. I like that you made Abigail the one to want to pursue Will, and when he finally does do something, it's his dissociative personality. Loved, loved, loved that. My heart hurt when Will said he would never do that though! Poor baby.

This is just fantastic, really. If you want to continue this, I would be so game!

[streussal]

Oh, I've had this in my "to read" bookmarks basically since you posted it, and I'm sorry I didn't get to it before now. This is fantastic! Abigail's terror of her father was so nicely rendered. The relationship with Marissa so real. Fantastic work!

[birdundrstander]

Oh wow, I'm crying; this was so amazing. This tore my heart into a million little pieces, but in a good way. I loved all of Abigail's interactions with her father. The idea of him standing over her bed with a knife is so creepy and disturbing. Also, gah, Will kissing Abigail during his "episodes" makes my heart sing. This is wonderful; thank you so much for writing it!