Fabregas's Deft Touch

[spritemuffin]

Fabregas's Deft Touch.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Cesc Fabregas/Nicklas Bendtner
Disclaimer: not true, no matter how much fangirls want it to be
Warnings: PORN. yea.
A/N: so yea, first stab (or thrust I suppose) at a sex scene, let me know how it turns out.
also this fic is based on the Nick Live Cesc Fabregas Show (Raise Your Game) you can find it here

Comments

[stern_suedens]

This was just awesome!

I can't believe it's your first time writing this, though... it flows so well - just enough detail, not too much.

And it's so damned funny, too! And sweet. The way they tease each other, make fun of each other...

I also loved the way they spoke Danish, Spanish, English, all mixed up and getting more and more confused, the hotter they got. It conjures up all KINDS of images!

thanks! :)

[spritemuffin]

*grin* thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I don't speak spanish or danish but I thought that they'd really add to the story so I tried to work it in (glad it didn't come out choppy)