Springfic: "Two Aurors, Eight Moments" for kelleypen

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Title: Two Aurors, Eight Moments
Author: vane_nt
Recipient: kelleypen
Character(s): Alice and Frank Longbottom
Rating: PG
Word count: 1902
Warnings (highlight to view): None
Summary: Eight moments in a working day.
Author's Notes (if any): Thank you mods for spreading the gen love, and for being so patient and understanding. I also want to thank my beta for her

Comments

[kelleypen]

Thank you so much! I really liked seeing that Neville may have earned his softer side through his dad instead of his mum. You wrote a Frank I would very much like to know better. Your Alice reminded me a little of Tonks--minus the rainbow hair and clutziness. Very well done.

[pinkelephant42]

This is a lovely look into the life of the Aurors, and I love how you've characterized Frank and Alice. The personalities and setting are so believable and fit right into JKR's wizarding world. :D

[arnel_63]

This is a nice look at how the world is viewed by Neville's parents and how they view the job of Auror.

[lazy_neutrino]

What a really interesting look at these two. You make them very different individuals and I like the way that Alice's early thoughts are all about Alice, and Frank's early thoughts are all about Alice, too really - it's only at the end that he takes a stand as different fron her. She's not plagued by self-doubt, is she? :) He is by far the more reflective of the two. A really thought-provoking story.