Springfic: "Heartstring" for chibitoaster

[springmod]

Title: Heartstring
Author: Such_Heights
Recipient: chibitoaster
Character(s): Ollivander, Luna, Dean
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1,750 words
Warnings (highlight to view): none
Summary: In the summer after the war, they need wands again.
Betas: glass_icarus and wanderlight

Comments

[slam_girl]

I really like how you showed the bond that developed between Luna and Ollivander during the war plays out post-war with her taking charge and helping get back on his feet. I can see Luna having a knack for wands actually. And including Dean as his first customer was a nice touch! ^_^

[still_infinity]

This was absolutely lovely. You channeled Luna's voice perfectly, who in my opinion is quite a hard character to write. I can see Luna and Mr Ollivander forming a special bond over their war experiences. Luna always struck me as very intelligent and insightful person, her taking over the position of Ollivander's assistant makes complete sense to me. Well done.

[shiiki]

Wonderful story! I very much enjoyed Luna and Ollivander's interaction and how she persuaded him to go back. Interesting idea, having Luna work with the wands. I do think she'd be good at it, and you showed that nicely. Lovely to see her actively involved in creating the happy ending for the wizarding world by bringing back such an integral part of it!

[featherxquill]

This is very sweet and very real. I love the depiction of postwar London and the exploration of Luna and Ollivander's relationship.

[thimble_kiss]

This was such a lovely, hopeful story. It's got a very 'Luna' spirit to it, I think. :) I love the idea that Luna and Ollivander would stay friends and stay in touch in some way after the war!