As the Rush Comes [FFVII, Cloud/Tifa, NC-17]

[sekiharatae]

Title: As The Rush Comes
Author:  sekiharatae
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex.  Also, I don't really know what I'm talking about.  This could be unintentionally comedic.
Prompt: Final Fantasy VII, Cloud/Tifa: sex on the back of a motorcycle - leather and oil and hot metal
Word count: 1560
Summary: Pretty much what the prompt says.  PWP.
A/N:  This was due on

Comments

[amethyst_key]

*Eyes shift to the garage door* Uh... I have an urge to take the motorcycle out for a spin... *Zones out* ... Oh, yeah... *Blinks* Um. *Coughs* Sorry.

Absolutely awesome!

... I'm too speechless for anything else. ^.~

[sekiharatae]

You actually have/ride motorcycles? So I made up the right details? (hurray!)

[amethyst_key]

XD Yes, I do have/ride motorcycles. This caused a bit of confusion when I first read the fic. Actually, I was like "Wait a second... I can't do that on MY motorcycle

motorcycle sex

[anonymous]

I don't think I'm that flexible anymore. Or ever. I tried to visualize the two of them in relation to Fenrir, but gave it up and decided to let it happen. It's much better that way! Cloud's been told not to over-think things, and I guess I should spend a quarter and get a clue, too. Life's more fun that way!!! Thx mom calling

[seelenspiel]

Oh god, yes. ..... XD
That was amazing! Totally agree with Cloud on the skirts - just to make you write more of those fics!

[sekiharatae]

LOL. I wanted to write a motorcycle fic where they did it in this position, rather than with Tifa turned around. And it just seemed they were already halfway there, so it'd be way more convenient if she didn't have to stand up and take her shorts off...

That's really probably not a good rationale for making her wear a dress, is it? ^^;

[seelenspiel]

Oh, it is! Absolutely is. lol

[jane_drew_]

Harumph. My comment from yesterday did, in fact, get eaten when the Internet started arguing with my computer. Ah, well. I'll just pretend that it was a masterpiece of erudition and analysis, now tragically lost. *grin*

Basically, I really liked the last exchange between Cloud and Tifa-- great to see the cheerful, semi-teasing between them; really added an emotional level to the hot!sex of the rest of the piece. And, it was a nice reference back to tipsy Cloud's musings on Tifa's wardrobe in the earlier fic.

Also liked how you FIRST established that Cloud is super-competent as a motorcyclist, and THEN moved to the back-of-the-cycle sex. ;-)

As always, great work!

JD

[sekiharatae]

Awww... I'm sorry it got eaten. =(

I'm glad you picked up on the reference to liking her in a skirt. ^__^ (It makes me happy!)

LOL. Well, you know... didn't want anyone worrying that they were gonna crash. I figure that if the man can wield dual swords while traveling that fast -- and not wreck -- he can spare one hand for Tifa. (Although, admittedly, she's far more distracting.)

[sekiharatae]

How did I miss replying to this comment? O.o I'm so so sorry!

I'm very glad you liked it! (And I so think Cloud must be very very tempting. ^.~)