Particle (Kingdom Hearts, Sora/Riku/Kairi)

[belladonna12]

Title:  Particle
Author: belladonna12
Rating: PG13
Word count: 673

Warning:  Battle, blood, dark themes, betrayal, all that good stuff.
Summary:  A reversed series, and Riku’s our hero…
A/N: Okay, I have a lot of ideas floating through my head on this, but practically no time to write ‘em, or this would probably be a huge, epic fic and might even have

Comments

[mereprototype]

Can you change it so there's no font tag setting the color in at least the header? I can't be the only person who checks his flist on a page with a black background.

[belladonna12]

Since I don't use the HTML thing, nor do I have any skills in HTML, I sadly have no idea how to. I'm sorry.

[mereprototype]

If you edit the post to change it to HTML instead of Rich Text, and make sure that "Disable Auto Formatting" is NOT checked (might want to copy in case you need to copy/paste for formatting issues), it should default to using standard layout colors.

The code then for the cut is < lj-cut text="Title Here" >, just take out the spaces!

[mirrankei]

Oh, this is fabulous! I hope you plan on finishing it. I've never seen all three of them switched around before: it's usually just Sora and Riku. I really like this version! <3

Also, it seems like it's been so long since I read a nice KH1 fic. Thank you!

[wherdragon]

I too would love to see more of this. I admit that having Kairi act petulant and "girlish" irks me, but I'd like to see where else you go in it. Please do write more!

[wherdragon]

Forgot to mention that "wark" for Donald is a hilarious descriptor!