Variety [FFVII, Cloud/Tifa, NC-17]

Jun 05, 2009 21:54

Title: Variety
Author: sekiharatae 
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex
Prompt: Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children; Cloud x Tifa; Caught Masturbating; ~Explaining was less important than finishing.~
Word count: 1450
Summary: The mind is the most important sexual organ.
A/N:  Tried to do something different, hopefully requester will approve.  ( Read more... )

final fantasy vii, sekiharatae

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eerian_sadow June 6 2009, 06:25:07 UTC
hahaha! this was delightful! love how the begining read like a romance novel.

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sekiharatae June 6 2009, 18:42:17 UTC
Thank you! =) I have read entirely too many of said novels in my time...

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amethyst_key June 6 2009, 07:22:43 UTC
Super dooper Tae smut fic... AHOY.

*Coughs* But, I totally like what you did with this.

I can see Cloud dragging her into the living room and making her watch a bunch of different movies... just to see what she dreamed about... or at least, what role he'd get her dreams.

*Grins* I giggled at the "Captian Strife".

XD Awesome.

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sekiharatae June 6 2009, 18:43:32 UTC
LOL on the movie thing. ("What about this one... do I make a convincing "whoever"? Which is especially amusing because my first idea for a title was You make a wonderful dread pirate Roberts)

Thank you!

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windrider1 June 6 2009, 09:59:57 UTC
First: Happy prompter here!! **grins**

Second: not at all how I imagined when I made the prompt and that's one of the reasons I love it so much! LOL. We know where we're going in our own imaginations, so it's nice to get a ride in someone else's. And this was wonderful. From the romance novel beginning to the humor at the end, all sexy and all delicious!

**happy dancing**

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sekiharatae June 6 2009, 18:38:11 UTC
Oh my! Now I'm really glad I didn't go into details babbling at you about what I was working on (but now I will, if you're interested -- let me know and I will tell tales).

*whew* glad I made you a happy prompter. Truthfully, it wasn't what I set out to write, either, but then I thought it would be fun and different to write a *cough* masturbation fantasy rather than just the mechanics of it.

... it also made for some potentially cracky dialogue choices. "That was my last pair of pantalettes, you bastard!" (Except -first- it was cracky and -second- it wasn't the correct time period for pantalettes.)

Um... anyway... babbling. Very happy you're happy! *hugs*

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jane_drew_ June 6 2009, 16:31:15 UTC
Hee! Excellent! I loved the "I watched a pirate movie" sentence as the conclusion. Now I'm wondering if Cloud will play to the fantasy once he's joined her. Because, hee (or possibly "Yaarr!").

I really liked the way you started with Tifa's imagined scene--- which did really read like a romance novel/pirate movie fantasy-- and then switched to reality from Cloud's perspective, in which his reaction to what Tifa was doing was, "Gee, I should get home ahead of schedule more often....". *grin*

(of course, now I'm also wondering what pirate movies in that 'verse would look like, considering the previous movie night choices.... )

JD

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sekiharatae June 6 2009, 18:41:46 UTC
I've actually been thinking I should blame you for this, JD. (^.~) I was halfway finished with a much more straightforward version of this, when the fantasy angle hit me. The reason I blame you for that, is because of your comment on the prompt making you have cracky ideas... and lots of the dialogue choices that popped into my head were cracky. (see above)

Thank you for the feedback, though! I was sorta kinda trying for the trashy romance angle, and definitely for the fantasy angle. (Woot!)

I liked Cloud's reaction, too. He popped in and almost wrote it himself. ^.~ (Heck yeah! I wanna watch!... said he.)

Pirates of Mideel? Goblin Island? The Black Materia? (Cracks up laughing at that last one...)

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jane_drew_ June 7 2009, 15:55:19 UTC
Must... not... picture...Sephiroth... as... Captain... Barbossa... GAAAAAH!

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crystalstars_88 June 7 2009, 22:31:31 UTC
i was totally picturing tifa as a pirate girl you see on the cover of romance novels, with bosoms heaving;) her pretending to resist him in her dream was very hot. and Captain Cloud = yummy.

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sekiharatae June 8 2009, 05:58:07 UTC
Whee! Thank you very much. This was a different approach, and -- although it was more difficult -- it was also lots of fun!

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