Comments | springkink: into my arms [ffxii, dr cid/balthier, nc-17]

intradependency in springkink

into my arms [ffxii, dr cid/balthier, nc-17]

Jun 06, 2009 01:25

Title: Into My Arms
Author/Artist: ellnyx
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Dubcon, incest
Prompt: Final Fantasy XII, Dr. Cid/Balthier: dubcon - love me like you used to
Word count: 400

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( In the process of capture, bangaa claws had made tatters of the youth's dignity and dress. )

logistika_nyx, ellnyx, final fantasy xii

Comments 11

syvia June 5 2009, 20:34:40 UTC

Oh. God. If I could just. Express... how hot and wrong and HOT this was.

Not my prompt. But thank you. So much.

intradependency June 6 2009, 11:25:04 UTC

So glad you liked it!

hamimifk June 6 2009, 06:28:57 UTC

Incest scares me, BUT I had to read it, because you wrote it (lol). ._. Two questions though, if you don't mind.

What exactly does dubcon mean!? *no clue*
Is Dr. Cid a Bangaa here!? *confused*

XD Sorry if my questions seem childish.

Btw, this was good (of course it was, you wrote it *a fan of your work*), though again, incest is squicky to me (though I wrote an Eragon incest fic for this comm, with another in the works, so apparently I'm a very confused sort? *doesn't know anymore*).

intradependency June 6 2009, 11:36:38 UTC

Thanks for reading, even if it is a squick. This was a bit of a self-squick fic too, in that I really had to stretch to write it, twisting and twisting the characters until I could find a way to get this to happen...but self-squicking is something I like to do. *is a contradictory sort* :) I guess I like taking prompts that poke at all the awkward spaces in my brain ( ... )

hamimifk June 6 2009, 23:19:06 UTC

Sometimes it's good to explore some squick, it helps expand your writing and give you a different out look on it. Incest is my main squick, but I've been slowly picking at it, trying to see what make others like it so much. Still not a fan of it, but I can withstand it better. lol I find myself tredding lightly as I go about writing the ones I agreed to do for this comm (a total of 3, as I just realized).

Ah, thank you for answering my questions! I know what non-con means, but I could never figure out dub-con for some reason. Ooo, I understand now. ^^; Sorry. o.O Yeah, I sort of forgot Balthier's name was Ffamran...

Hmm, that's an interesting idea. I hadn't thought about that. XD My assumption skills are a tad bit lacking (I'm horrible at guessing games, lol), but I now know to keep it in mind the next time I read one of your works.

sparkism June 14 2009, 01:34:53 UTC

ksdjfksdjf oh man that was fantastic, just, guh. I'm gonna own up to this prompt by saying that I didn't think anyone would claim it, but thank thank thank you for doing so, even if it was squicky for you. ♥ It totally made my day. :D

intradependency June 14 2009, 04:07:14 UTC

I tend to misuse 'squick' too often just to describe things that are difficult for me to tackle. It was more, Cid, and Balthier, and maaaan, if I write this it's not gonna be sexy because they're both going to be *hating* the fact that they're doing this...so I worried about taking the prompt and not doing the kink justice. I am so glad you liked it! :)

sparkism June 14 2009, 04:10:05 UTC

Haha, don't worry, you did it perfectly. ♥ Thanks again.

threewalls November 25 2009, 13:00:57 UTC

Oh, Balthier. They're both so good at pretending... up until a point, yes?

intradependency November 26 2009, 03:36:39 UTC

Worlds of delusion, here. It's clearly genetic!

The long version of this, the one with pages and pages of justification, had Venat randomly possessing Ffamran for years and years without him knowing, all for similar exchanges. But, it turns out some topics *are* dark enough to daunt me.

threewalls November 26 2009, 21:08:59 UTC

Venat willing to help Cid accomplish whatever he wants? That seems plausible. And, well, betrayal is apparently a push button of mine?

(Balthier can't believe it's really happening, but it is and he can't stop it... yeah.)