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Naked Flame [Final Fantasy 4, Rubicante/Entire Party, PG-13]

Nov 03, 2008 02:30

Title: Naked Flame
Author: anima_mecanique
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Questionable innuendo. Oblique nudity.
Word count: 870
Summary: Final Fantasy IV, Rubicante/Entire Party: Exhibitionism - A gentleman and a pervert.
The Archfiend of Fire knows that some things are only meant for the eyes of the worthy.
A/N: This is probably the only fic I've written where I'm ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

Requester here! burningmayo November 3 2008, 14:32:48 UTC

As the person that made this request (more for the silliness of it than anything else), I really liked it. XD The individual party members' reactions are priceless. I can see them all acting that way.

Re: Requester here! anima_mecanique November 3 2008, 17:24:16 UTC

Thanks! It came out a lot more serious than I originally intended, and I don't think I've ever written anything that made me think "What the hell am I WRITING?" quite as often, but it was a whole lot of fun and I'm glad you liked it! XD

lassarina November 3 2008, 16:10:09 UTC

I. Oh my. Yes. the opening paragraph, in particular, is gorgeous - I am squealing in glee at your meta here. I like the little touches of inhumanity, like how he "found the concept of chivalry to his liking," and also the comparison of himself to Barbariccia and how they garb themselves. This is awesome, and I really enjoyed it.

syvia November 3 2008, 17:08:43 UTC

Well. Done. :3

Much love for your take on the state of Rubicante's existance, all of the elemental references (especially the detail about the cape and how it was made), and his lack of understanding with regard to the party's reactions.

I wondered how you were planing to tackle this prompt, and I very much enjoyed the result. *applauds* ^^

anima_mecanique November 3 2008, 20:47:33 UTC

Yeah, I was kind of wondering how I was going to tackle it myself ^^; Glad you liked the results, though.

I love the Four Fiends far more than they deserve, considering they get like four lines apiece ^_^

n_finitefangirl November 10 2008, 20:19:16 UTC

XD This was a wonderful character insight into the Fiend of Flames. I especially enjoy Rydia's reaction--perhaps it comes from her time with the Eilodeens?

childofatlantis January 12 2009, 20:40:57 UTC

I am torn between zomg beautiful and aaaaaaaaaaaaah I will never ever be able to win that battle again now!