Summer in the City [FAKE, Dee/Ryo, M]

Jun 17, 2008 09:32

Title: Summer in the City
Author: sumthinlikhuman
Pairing: Dee/Ryo
Rating: M
Warnings: vague sex on a subway, swearing
Prompt: FAKE, Dee/Ryo; sex on the subway - Inadvertent grinding on a crowded train gets progressively hotter as the train starts to empty.
Summary: It’s been six days.
Notes: OMG, IT’S LATE. I was trying so hard to get this thing just right, but ( Read more... )

sumthinlikhuman, fake

Leave a comment

Comments 6

mithrigil June 17 2008, 18:07:44 UTC
HOT. And Dee is a pest. But mostly HOT.

Reply

sumthinlikhuman June 17 2008, 18:13:16 UTC
:D Thank you!

Reply


lauand June 17 2008, 20:02:15 UTC
He, he. Hot. Nice prompt and even nicer use of it. I'm not the requester, but if I were, I'd be very happy with the result.

Reply


cheydancer June 17 2008, 20:45:17 UTC
Lovely, hot and sweetly funny in the way only Dee and Ryo can be. Very, very in character for both of them. Dee persuades and Ryo caves, because in truth, it's been six days for him, too and is just as difficult.

The use of the unnamed melody running throughout the story was very effective... I kept hearing "One Week" by Barenaked Ladies in my head while I read. :>

I'm not the requestor either, but I so very much enjoyed this. Wonderful job.

Reply


ladyrazorsharp June 20 2008, 06:46:24 UTC
Whew, FAKE! Dee and Ryo are probably the hottest things around. I saw this in live-action in my head rather than anime...

Reply


wounded_melody June 21 2009, 11:55:15 UTC
That was just so hot and *perfect*!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up