Watched For and Seen [Bleach, Yoruichi/Urahara, R]

Jun 17, 2008 00:18

Title: Watched For and Seen
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incandescens June 17 2008, 09:59:33 UTC
That's absolutely lovely. Beautiful.

I particularly like the phrase "tarnished silver eyes". So very expressive.

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liralen June 17 2008, 19:30:28 UTC
*dances* I'm so glad you liked!!

I'm very glad that that phrase pleased. It was fun to imply the addition meanings of that.

It was really fun to see our two different takes on the same prompt. I now know that it's okay to take a prompt you have. And why. It is fun to see.

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liralen June 17 2008, 19:32:52 UTC
*bows gently*

Yay! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!!

Yeah... it was fun to suddenly realize, in this scene, just how the "watch me" could be important from all the different perspectives. And Ulquiorra and his eye and all those that would see through it was what first occurred to me when I read the prompt.

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scathachdhu June 17 2008, 17:41:30 UTC
I've been extremely fortunate to get two such incredible fics for this prompt. I love how this feels...very controlled and intense, managing to be playful even in serious moments. Just like the two of them XD. A completely believable look into her thoughts at that point in canon.

Thanks once again!

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liralen June 17 2008, 19:42:35 UTC
*grin* Thank you for wonderful prompts!

I'm glad that you like how this one felt, and that the two worked for you so well. Yay! I'm glad it pleased.

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