Comments | springkink: Moneymaker [Ouran High School Host Club, Mori/Kyouya, R]

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Moneymaker [Ouran High School Host Club, Mori/Kyouya, R]

Jun 12, 2008 19:15

Title: Moneymaker
Author: eternalsayonara
Rating: R
Warnings: Non-graphic sex. Against a wall.
Word count: ~700
Summary: Mori/Kyouya: Silence (trying to be silent during semi-public sex)
A/N: Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.

( It wouldn’t do at all to be caught like this, especially on school property. )

eternalsayonara, ouran high school host club

Comments 14

kyra_neko_rei June 13 2008, 00:18:34 UTC

AWESOME!!!!

The characterization is perfectly Kyouya.

eternalsayonara June 13 2008, 03:47:26 UTC

Wahh! Thank you so much! ^__^ It's my first time writing Ouran, so I was worried about the characterization. I'm so happy that you liked it; it really makes my day. <3

kat8cha June 13 2008, 02:40:26 UTC

Oh Mori, if Kyouya can think, you're doing it wrong.

XD Kidding. HOT! Very awesome.

eternalsayonara June 13 2008, 03:50:07 UTC

I know! Poor Mori. XD But I think he's pretty good if he can get Kyouya to stop thinking even for just a bit. ;D

Thank you so much! ♥

aisushi June 13 2008, 10:10:24 UTC

I-I love you, like, love you with the intensity of a thousand suns. The world needs more Mori/Kyouya. Like this. Hundreds more like this.

♥

eternalsayonara June 13 2008, 22:12:40 UTC

My very first big heart! *celebrates* \o/

Thank you very, very much! I'm so happy that you liked it. ^__^ I'm glad I took the prompt; I've never written Ouran before and Mori/Kyouya isn't a common pairing, so I was hesitant. But I like the way it turned out, and, more importantly, that I got such a wonderful response from you. It really makes me happy.

Thank you again! ♥ to the power of 1,000,000 suns. n___n

threewalls June 13 2008, 19:15:52 UTC

Kyouya is so crafty. ^.^

eternalsayonara June 13 2008, 21:58:20 UTC

Isn't he? XD But that's what makes him so special. ^.~

Thanks for the comment!

evil_whimsey June 14 2008, 19:15:37 UTC

oh god you melted my brain. Man, I needed that. ;D

I love how Mori dominates this piece, completely from the background. We don't see him, we barely hear him. But I don't know that I've ever wanted to tackle him to the ground so very much as I do right now.

Kyouya is great too, of course. And I'd love to know the story of just how he came to fall into his own trap.

Really well done, thanks for sharing this.

eternalsayonara June 14 2008, 20:34:24 UTC

*flails at your icon* ♥

Mori seems like a behind-the-scenes kind of guy to me. But of course he's really running the show. And, boy, how well he does it...>:3

*laughs* I'm not sure just how Kyouya fell for it. Probably he got a little too close, and Mori's magnetism was too much for him. ;D

Thank you so much! I'm so flattered that you liked it. ^__^