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The Third Time (Saiyuki, Gojyo/Goku)

Jun 09, 2008 02:06

The Third Time

Author: lillypuff
Characters From: Saiyuki
Pairing(s): Gojyo/Goku, Gojyo/Hakkai, Sanzo/Goku
Rating: R
Prompt: Gojyo/Goku: hurt/comfort - "monkey fixes the wounds"
Word Count: 3,379
Warnings: angst (this is not a happy fic), implied alcohol abuse, language, m/m err…comfort? (not sexuality), Gojyo actually using an ashtray.
Summary: It had ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

animegoil June 9 2008, 16:27:20 UTC

I love you for this <3 Goku was really mature in this. It really shows how he's grown throughout the series--and estimates an ending growth level too. <3 Goku fixing things is adorable, and I'm glad you really went at this thoroughly. The fic was complete, and in character and touching and I loved it.

lillypuff June 9 2008, 18:11:08 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I too really enjoy grownup!Goku, he has such wonderful potential =) Thanks so much for reading!

freeradical9 June 10 2008, 01:36:33 UTC

This was sweet. Goku's honest and unselfish actions here are really quite heartwarming, and I love the maturity he shows. Very nicely done.

lillypuff June 12 2008, 18:22:29 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

fuschiafinn June 10 2008, 04:37:50 UTC

So very well written! I love how well characterized everyone is. Even Sanzo and he never makes a first person appearance. Goku is both mature and charming. Also, one can really feel the friendship here, something that is so often glossed over in Saiyuki fics, if not lost entirely. Again, lovely job!

lillypuff June 12 2008, 18:24:29 UTC

Awww, thank you. I'm glad you thought everyone was properly portrayed =) Thank you for reading!

writtenbyrandom June 11 2008, 08:32:09 UTC

This was my prompt, and all I can really do is agree with what everyone above me said.^^ Awesome job. I personally loved where you ended it, leaving it so open like that, bittersweet and real.

lillypuff June 12 2008, 18:25:56 UTC

YAY! I was wondering if I'd find out who requested this. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

chomiji June 13 2008, 03:36:42 UTC

Oh, poor Gojyo! And poor Hakkai ... and poor Goku, what a handful they are. But he does a really good job. (And so did you!)

lillypuff June 13 2008, 06:44:35 UTC

I know, all three of them are having a tough time, but I'm sure they will work it out =)

Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it!