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streussal May 12 2008, 18:15:42 UTC
I really like this.

"Fuck, fuck, fuck." Like many people Mello had met, Matt had a mind that spent most of its time lying in the gutter. It was, perhaps, one of the things that kept Matt from being more like L, Mello and Near; it wasn't that Matt was dumb, precisely (although he was that, too, from where Mello was standing) it was, quite simply, that he got distracted too easily.

Yes!

"Fuck." Matt backed off a little and shook his head. He reminded Mello of a puppy sometimes; all teeth and clumsiness, with a tendency to pounce on anything that moved and in need of a firm hand to keep him from making a mess.

Nice line.

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misura May 13 2008, 14:44:35 UTC
Thank you! *wishes there was more fic about this pairing*

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