Firefly(Serenity): Simon/Kaylee

[syvia]

Title: Sweetness
Author/Artist: syvia
Rating: R
Warnings: non-explicit sex... and fluff
Word Count: 1612
Summary: Kaylee's never wanted for company- until she met Simon.
Notes: This is not that scene with River watching them. I drove myself nuts trying to figure out where in the ship they were macking, and all I could figure out after an hour of

Comments

[evilmissbecky]

Oh guh. This is beautiful. Spot-on Kaylee voice. Thank you for this!

[syvia]

Belated- you're very welcome. ^^ I adore this series, and it's fun to write as Kaylee- the accent just makes her voice more clear. :3

[jlsigman]

I admit to not having seen all of the series (or the movie), but WOW, that was awesome.

[syvia]

Thanks! ^^

[usagivindaloo]

*gushes with glee* Wow, this was my prompt, and I have to say, this is even better than I imagined it could be. I agree, you totally nailed Kaylee's voice. And the humor was so awesome too, little touches here and there (love Inara's birthday present XD), and damnit, good-in-bed!Simon is just damn hot. So SO good. Thank you!

[syvia]

Aww~! Yay, I'm glad you liked it! The crew of Serenity is just too much fun. ^^ I have no problem with them living (kinda, a little bit) inside my head. ;p (*lmao* Runs on batteries~! I always have to laugh at that line in the movie- not to mention Mal's reaction. XD It just occurred to me that if she'd gotten a toy from ANYONE- guess who?)

*purrrrrrrr* Yes.

You're welcome!

[snipervalentine]

Awwww, this is nice. And kudos on Kaylee's speech patterns; it tends to be waaay overdone in fanfic to the point where she sounds like a "Dukes of Hazzard" guest star. Wonderful job!

[syvia]

*sporfle* Oh, ouch. I hope I never read those fics. I think having relatives with similar accents (and watching the show again right before I started writing~) helped. :3

Thanks! XD

[skitz_phenom]

This was really lovely. Sweet and mmmmmmm...hot at the same time. And I completely agree that you did a great job of capturing Kaylee's voice without going overboard.

I like the bit with Zoe - very sweet and just a little sad.

The metal grill of the walkway bit into her shoulder blades, but it was good- home and Serenity and she always felt everything more when she felt the hum of the generator on her skin- close to her heart thrumming through her veins with her blood and no way she wanted to be anywhere else.

Fantastic description there! Great job!

[syvia]

^^ Thank you very much! I applaud your icon and I'm glad you liked- *mrrr* engine room sex is hot- no pun intended~.