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Heat Guy J (Kia/Ray)

Jul 25, 2007 11:14

Title: In The Choices We Make
Author: Jan toxictattoo
Rating: R, incest
Word Count: 1049
Summary: Life is about the choices we make.
A/N: For the springkink July Spring Kink Fest, prompt: July 24: #21. Heat Guy J, Kia/Ray: Half-brothers - "Play me a song" and for writing_days third song prompt. Sorry this is a day late. I had it ready to go but then LJ blew up San ( Read more... )

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rosehiptea July 25 2007, 16:43:10 UTC

I actually haven't seen all of Heat Guy J yet... I must remedy that. But I enjoyed this story anyway, it was very sensual and I like how the music tied in to it.

toxictattoo July 27 2007, 00:41:22 UTC

Thanks!

Heat Guy J, much like Jet from Cowboy Bebop, is so often overlooked. It's one of my sleeper favorites.

galerian_ash July 25 2007, 18:24:12 UTC

And so we meet again *grins widely*

This is simply a wonderful story. I love the easy languid mood between them; how perfect they fit together. It just felt so right for them to get together like this. And the imagery is lovely, I could really see Ray curled up on Kia's bed while he goofed off on his guitar.

Thank you, you're too great for words!

toxictattoo July 27 2007, 00:42:37 UTC

Indeed we do!

With only one episode to work off of for Ray, I still found it easy to write for him. Not so much because he was a blank slate but because the animators did such a wonderful job with conveying so much through the brief touches we see of him.

Thank YOU!

writtenbyrandom July 26 2007, 10:25:22 UTC

-stares avidly- its so pretty... -touches the shiny-

echoing previous sentiments, the banter between them is lovely and fluid and just easy. this works so well.

toxictattoo July 27 2007, 00:43:18 UTC

Heh. Thank you. Dialogue is the biggest pain in my butt, and also my favorite to write. It comes to me before anything else most of the time.