Final Fantasy XII (Balthier/Fran)

[laylah]

Title: Nothing of Her Kind
Author: Laylah
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 500
Summary: He keeps their relationship as professional as possible, and tries not to stare over long at the curve of her waist or the length of her legs.

Comments

[puella_nerdii]

*prr* Ooh, gorgeous. I love the emphasis on Fran's height, and the part about how without her costume she is as though burnished is simply lovely.

[laylah]

*prrr* Thank you! I think I actually mentioned bronze, in the first version of that line, but then I wanted to avoid anything so cold. Am glad the revision worked. ^^

[laylah]

Thank you! ^___^
I realize this should have been a piece about, you know, shameless porn, but for some reason in my brain it made more sense as a piece about xenophobia. Yeah. er.

I'm glad it worked!

[jpegasus]

yay racism!

by which I mean yay cat fic!
I love him poking at all the things he's been told and deciding that he's gonna be a better guy than that. ^^

[laylah]

Thank you! <3 <3

I am glad it works when cats do weird things with their prompts. ^^;

[jheti]

I um, I had something to say but it all came out stupidly fangirly stupid so I will just shout WOO AWESOME EXCLAMATION POINTS AND ONES, and then leave. ^_~

[laylah]

Hee. Yay! Thank you!

[lassarina]

*faints*

*fans self hard*

Oh, yes. Yes yes yes.

[laylah]

*prrrr* Thank you!