Yami no Matsuei (Tatsumi/Hisoka)

[ranalore]

Title: Treat Him Right
Author: Rana Eros
Rating: Still with the inexplicitness.
Word count: 670
Summary: Tatsumi's behavior changes. Hisoka adjusts.
Author's Notes: For the prompt, "Yami no Matsuei, Tatsumi/Hisoka: Preferential treatment (showing a soft side only to them) - 'Tell me u don't want me to stop.'" Betaed by

Comments

[veleda_k]

*happy sigh* That was wonderful. You write the best Tatsumi/Hisoka. I love the details you give, such as the fact that most of the office thinks Hisoka is being bribed, and the way you mention Wakaba, Watari, and Tsuzuki's excitement (which is adorable and I can definitely see it).

The conversation feels just right to me--all the right amounts of awkwardness, politeness, and passion.

And, of course, I love the ending.

[ranalore]

Thanks, hon! Poor Hisoka, I had to do the excitement thing. The image was just too cute. And you know Yuma and Saya join in when they come down for visits.

Since there's no actual sex in the piece, I sort of used the conversation as a stand-in. So I wanted to get the right tone in it. *G*

Thank you again!

[fuyou]

Oh wow, that was just lovely. I agree with veleda_k: you certainly have a way with writing this pairing. Truly great writing.

[ranalore]

Thank you so much!

[lirren]

Oh, this is wonderful! And I love that it's Wakaba, Watari and Tsuzuki who see the truth (and, of course, it sets up the playing field for my secret indulgence in Tsuzuki/Watari *grin*).

Hisoka draws breath to ask what he means, but thinks better of it. He knows; because Tatsumi doesn't do it to anyone else, he finds it flattering. That makes him wonder. "What if I were to treat you like that too, Seiichirou?"

I love, love, love that paragraph. It gives me wonderful shivers to think of Hisoka using Tatsumi's first name. Mmmmm!

[veleda_k]

and, of course, it sets up the playing field for my secret indulgence in Tsuzuki/Watari

Someday in the not to distant future, I fully plan to write a fic where Watari and Tsuzuki are lovers, and they work together to get Tatsumi and Hisoka together.

[lirren]

Oh my god. I would be your personal slave for a month if you did that. *whimpers*

[kurenai_tenka]

Vel, you are an amazing person. ♥

[jtriskell]

[ranalore]

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it! *G*

[animadri]

Hisoka draws breath to ask what he means, but thinks better of it. He knows; because Tatsumi doesn't do it to anyone else, he finds it flattering. That makes him wonder. "What if I were to treat you like that too, Seiichirou?"

*thud*

Inexplicit, but absolutely beautiful! *flails* at the whole conversation in Tatsumi's office and when Hisoka used his first name... I practically squeed myself out of my chair.

[ranalore]

Inexplicit, but not unsexy or unsensual. *G* Your love for this pairing makes me all kinds of happy. *hugs*