Final Fantasy XII (Basch/Vossler)

Jul 18, 2007 05:21

Title: Make This Last
Author: Laylah
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~4200
Summary: "You want more than a sparring match, Sir Azelas," Basch says. "What stays you?"
A/N: I would like to apologize to the prompter, for going on at such length here that the foreplay bits are less the focus of the entire story; and also to say thank you so much for the ( Read more... )

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mithrigil July 18 2007, 12:56:01 UTC
Three things, L.

1) WATER POLO. Such love, such love.

2) Vossler obsessed with his own stamina. Somehow this makes a ot of sense, even though in this he's not yet thirty.

3) GUH. Yeah, you did need to write it. Oh, oh, I melt.

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laylah July 18 2007, 13:02:50 UTC
I almost, ALMOST felt bad about basically stuffing someone else's prompt into the one I was supposed to be writing ...only not. It was too good an image. ^^
and since Vossler was sort of convinced that UST = foreplay, it was almost appropriate!

<3 <3

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laylah July 18 2007, 13:03:30 UTC
:D :D
Thank you!
Posting this one, I swear, is just the icing -- the writing itself was such a treat.

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silver_ariane July 18 2007, 13:50:33 UTC
Well, now I'm awake, the blood pressure is up...

how physical they are. guh. <3 <3

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laylah July 19 2007, 00:18:13 UTC
Basch being a shameless cockhound? omg, so much fun. <3

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manic_intent July 18 2007, 15:12:22 UTC
oh my god. :O so hot!

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laylah July 19 2007, 00:18:56 UTC
Thank you! :D :D

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sister_coyote July 18 2007, 16:17:42 UTC
Oh, yes. This is so lovely -- eager and yet slow-paced, with both of them desiring the best things in the other, and the way Basch is at once unsure and comfortable. And oh, so good to see them happy, Vossler laughing, being good to one another. *prrrrr*

Thank you so much. ♥

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laylah July 19 2007, 00:19:40 UTC
You're so very welcome!

I think Vossler laughing was my favorite moment in the whole thing. It kind of caught me by surprise, and then it was just. o. I want to see that more often. <3

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