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Saiyuki (Gojyo/Hakkai, Sanzo)

Jul 17, 2007 09:10

Title: Killing Buddha
Author: Jan toxictattoo
Rating: R
Word Count: 1057
Summary: Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.

Author's Notes: For the prompt: July 17 #52. Saiyuki, Sanzo: Unrequited love - "Sanzo had never been approachable, and now even less"

( Killing Buddha )

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Comments 6

mainekosama July 17 2007, 15:06:38 UTC

Poor Sanzo. I could feel his loneliness here. It was painful to see his hopes, so careful and then they were crushed. And how he looked at Hakkai&Gojyo differntly after that and was more aware of them. He has no luck. Great story.

toxictattoo July 19 2007, 01:22:58 UTC

[grin] Thank you. It was a great prompt and I'm so glad I picked it up because it really fit the dynamic that I see for Sanzo...always on the outside looking in and longing for something that he will never reach for.

writtenbyrandom July 17 2007, 17:13:50 UTC

Bittersweet in definition! Gorgeous, sad, sweet, and sad again. I echo the above sentiments: poor Sanzo and wonderful story!

toxictattoo July 19 2007, 01:23:53 UTC

Thank you. Sanzo manages to bring that out in me.

amai_kaminari July 20 2007, 01:00:44 UTC

Wow, that was pretty intense. Normally, I am a 58 shipper all the way, but I truly felt bad for Sanzo here. Ouch. Talk about a rude awakening... literally.

As a die-hard 58 shipper, I swooned at your description of Hakkai and Gojyo twined together after a night of love-making. And Sanzo suddenly noticing Hakkai and Gojyo's secret smiles and stolen touches? Brilliant. *^_^*

toxictattoo July 27 2007, 00:36:33 UTC

[grin] Thank you! Sanzo, being my favorite, I love to get him laid at every opportunity. But he is so pretty when he angsts...