New Mutants: Betsy (Psylocke)/Doug (Cypher)

Jul 16, 2007 10:41

Author: Bitterfig

Title: Tea and Marmalade

Fandom: New Mutants

Pairing: Betsy Braddock (Psylocke)/Doug Ramsey (Cypher)

Summary: A shaman’s spell allows Betsy to finally resolve the ambiguous feelings she harbored for Doug before he died.

Beta Reader: Nzomniac

Word Count: 1038

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Implied romantic/sexual attraction ( Read more... )

bitterfig

Leave a comment

Comments 2

galerian_ash July 16 2007, 18:39:25 UTC
Out of all my prompts, this was the one I thought was least likely to get picked up. It also just so happened to be the prompt I was probably hoping for the most, so needless to say I was absolutely thrilled to see this.

I love the basic idea here; bittersweet and perfect. There's some really poignant lines in here, especially "her butterfly had become a knife" and what Doug said about dying -- I must admit that the latter actually made me cry. And you captured the characters so well, they both felt completely IC to me; it really felt like this, this would really be what Betsy would say to Doug if only she'd have the chance.

Really, I'm sitting here sniffling and already re-reading it. It's just everything I could've hoped for and more. I utterly love it! Thank you so very much for writing this ♡

Reply

bitterfig July 17 2007, 14:39:44 UTC
Thank you so much for your comments, I'm really pleased you liked my story. I pretty much got through adolescence reading X-Men, New Mutants, X-Factor, Excalibur etc. I haven't really followed any of Marvels mutant titles since the early 90's but when I saw your prompt I had to snag it. Pre-ninja Psylocke was one of my favorite characters and I always loved the hints that there might be some sort of a romance blossoming between her and Doug.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up