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Spriggan (Jean/Yu)

Jul 06, 2007 10:11

Title: Division of Duty
Author: Jan toxictattoo
Rating: PG
Word Count: 349
Summary: Domestic bliss…of a sort.
A/N: Prompt: #58. Spriggan, Jean/Yu: Domesticity - "You know, I could get used to this." .

( Division of Duty )

toxictattoo

Comments 8

galerian_ash July 6 2007, 17:29:24 UTC

Eee! Once again, you've totally made my day ♡

This is so them; exactly the kind of fic I was hoping for. Sweet and hilarious, the ending had me snickering like crazy XD Oh, and I adore the fact that you used a lot of actual aviation terms!

Thank you so very much, I loved it :)

toxictattoo July 6 2007, 17:40:58 UTC

[dies] You know...I should save us both the trouble and friend you and write for you on spec since you come up with the best ideas and I love to write for them, not even knowing who you are.

Consider yourself friended.

And thank you. I so love this movie and these two just ring my chimes something fierce. I had fun writing it and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

galerian_ash July 7 2007, 11:43:40 UTC

*grins widely* That sounds like an awesome idea, my friend! And you know, there's one more of my prompts that you have claimed... I'm counting the days for it ;D

ravenbell July 7 2007, 04:58:23 UTC

I am *tremendously* amused. Don't know the fandom, but I can still tell this is great.

toxictattoo July 7 2007, 09:42:37 UTC

[snickers] Thank you! The movie itself is fairly violent but the chemistry between these two onscreen is just so comfortable.

i_am_zan July 7 2007, 14:54:55 UTC

D'you know I haven't even thought of Spriggan in a while...I saw the film years, and years ago. The characters made an impression on me and Jean especially.

A lovely piece. It managed to recapture what I liked about these two. You are right in what you said about how they were so comfortable around each other. Kind of like a hand in glove partnership. ^__^ This could have pssibly been my first ever 'pairing' as it were. (A total manga/anime newbie then) Unfortunately Minekura owns me now!

Aah! Sorry to take up your review space for rambling.

Very well written, the dialogue captures perfectly how they are.

toxictattoo July 8 2007, 10:50:53 UTC

[grin] Thank you very much. One of my favorite things is to write dialogue and that part actually came to me first.

fallen_woman August 7 2007, 12:06:34 UTC

For me, Jean/Yu is like that tiny corner restaurant you don't really give much thought about but on the occasion you do drop by, you wonder why you don't eat there every day. Plus, it helps that Jean reminds me of an older Judeau.

I like the comfy patter between the two: Realistic cuteness rocks, and the suggestion of a domestic life makes their interaction all the more amusing. =)